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December 19, 2019 at 12:00 AM
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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. I like yaoi but I hate ShadowxSonic but it's all up to you, the reader, what couple will be endgame. I vouch for Amy Rose to have a nice relationship! I really like her, even though she might be annoying. I feel so bad for her right now. :(
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MARCH? That sucks so much ass it's not even funny just when the story was gettin good to.
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^We can't update yet. Some changes are being made so the edit option, and update/add chapter/etc. Is closed till March 1 until it is all finished. Or has someone been able to update already because I can't ...
I can't wait till March.
I can't wait till March.
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm. This is taking longer than usual. Where's the update? Don't keep us in suspense!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the best Sonic fic ever!
I love how you portray the characters. The situations, and etc.
This last chapter almost made me laugh my head off. Sonic was being such an ass. LOL.
I can't wait for you to update. This is what AFF.net is all about great authors, great storys and enjoyment.
The only complaint I have is the misspelling on expect in place of except and a few others. *but I understand wha you are saying so it isn't a big deal*
Love this story and am now a fan of your work...
Pheonix #1 fan... lol.
I love how you portray the characters. The situations, and etc.
This last chapter almost made me laugh my head off. Sonic was being such an ass. LOL.
I can't wait for you to update. This is what AFF.net is all about great authors, great storys and enjoyment.
The only complaint I have is the misspelling on expect in place of except and a few others. *but I understand wha you are saying so it isn't a big deal*
Love this story and am now a fan of your work...
Pheonix #1 fan... lol.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool, nice story. I like the pairings cause their interesting. You got some grammer mistakes though but otherwise, it really is a nice fic.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooookay, we totally need an updaaaaaate!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THREESOME! THREESOME!
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Let me begin by saying I'm actually very happy to find an interesting story such as this. I rather like the way you capture the love triangle, more so that it's not the typical Shadow & Sonic both in love with Amy type that I'm very sick of reading about. That just gets old far too fast. As for the characters involved in generald:
Amy
You seem to have matured Amy to a point. But more importantly, you gave us a reason why Amy was actually more mature in the ways of relationships and love because she took advice from Rouge, instead of depending on the same ole "Oh, she's just older" or just out and out taking her out of character by taking all the bad points of her personality (jealousy, annoying, stubborn) and taking them to the extreme or turning her into a carbon copy of Cream, only older. I've never understood how it's so 'hard' to capture Amy's personality. It's so easy and yet so very few can actually capture it. You haven't exactly got it either, but I'll at least give you points for explaining/giving a ligitmate reason why she wouldn't be the Amy we're used to seeing.
Shadow
He talks to much. Shadow doesn't talk nearly as much as he does in your story. And you need to find other words to describe him. Though I understand his character can be a little boring, try finding other words to describe him other than 'angry' and 'glare'. As a whole however, I am thankful for the way you have him in your story. He isn't an evil bastard (and I won't begin to explain how much that pisses me off) but he isn't overly sensitive and trying to sweep the person he's fighting for off their feet. Like in some horrible romantic novel. I actually like the interaction between himself and the other characters as a whole. I like that you actually gave him a relationship with Knuckles and the way he reacts to Sonic is just enjoyable to read. It actually gives the readers something to look forward to.
Sonic
He's not a cocky bastard that is trying to two-time the people in love with him and that's a good start. You make him playful, but not as much as is led to be believed from the games. You also make him think longer than two seconds and he seems to be one that does thing on a whim more often than not. Now don't take offense because this isn't a bad thing actually: it shows that his feelings and relationships with Amy and Shadow actually mean enough to him that he doesn't want to rush into anything to fast and actualy wants to sorts things out. It shows a true majority, not only on his part but his personality and I love it.
As for the love triangle, I must say it's very interesting. Apart from what I mentioned above, it's just nice to see how Sonic reacts to each different persons advances, how Amy reacts to the boys relationship together and how Shadow reacts to well, everything as a whole. No one is reacting in the same light exactly and that's what makes the read so interesting, other than trying to figure out just who Sonic will actually end up with.
A few other points:
-Tails not spending a lot of time with Sonic isn't exactly a bad thing, as he needs to get out of his shadow a bit. But in an off sense, because he usually is with Sonic, it's somewhat out of character.
-Cream is perfect, don't change her at all. And while romance is flying all around, don't give her one with Tails. They're far to young to actually understand the complications that come with true romantic relationships.
-I like how you seem to be telling four stories at once: Sonic's love life, Knuckles & Rouge and the Master Emerald drama, Eggman and this mysterious ring and Tails Cream and Team Chaotix? drama. It's all woven together nicely and it always has a little something for different readers to enjoy.
-You story is a wee bit lengthy. This can be a good thing or a bad thing. In the beginning, it seems to drag on but as the story gets more interesting, the length doesn't bother a person as much. However, it's getting past the first chapter or two that's the trama to some readers. Most won't stick around and that's a shame because it's nice read.
I look forward to seeing how the next installment will change the story, as this last chapter dropped lots of hints of up coming drama: Knuckles wanting to leave and then sleeping with Rouge. Shadow finding out about Amy and Sonic's possibly relationship (though I still believe it's partically one sided because I doubt Sonic actually sees it in the same light as Amy, what with him still being confused on how he truly feels about either hedgehog) and seeing how he will react to this. Tails going crazy with Team Chaotix and wanting to be alone with Cream. And then there's still the matter of the ring and Eggman.
I'll be keeping tabs on this story in the future.
Amy
You seem to have matured Amy to a point. But more importantly, you gave us a reason why Amy was actually more mature in the ways of relationships and love because she took advice from Rouge, instead of depending on the same ole "Oh, she's just older" or just out and out taking her out of character by taking all the bad points of her personality (jealousy, annoying, stubborn) and taking them to the extreme or turning her into a carbon copy of Cream, only older. I've never understood how it's so 'hard' to capture Amy's personality. It's so easy and yet so very few can actually capture it. You haven't exactly got it either, but I'll at least give you points for explaining/giving a ligitmate reason why she wouldn't be the Amy we're used to seeing.
Shadow
He talks to much. Shadow doesn't talk nearly as much as he does in your story. And you need to find other words to describe him. Though I understand his character can be a little boring, try finding other words to describe him other than 'angry' and 'glare'. As a whole however, I am thankful for the way you have him in your story. He isn't an evil bastard (and I won't begin to explain how much that pisses me off) but he isn't overly sensitive and trying to sweep the person he's fighting for off their feet. Like in some horrible romantic novel. I actually like the interaction between himself and the other characters as a whole. I like that you actually gave him a relationship with Knuckles and the way he reacts to Sonic is just enjoyable to read. It actually gives the readers something to look forward to.
Sonic
He's not a cocky bastard that is trying to two-time the people in love with him and that's a good start. You make him playful, but not as much as is led to be believed from the games. You also make him think longer than two seconds and he seems to be one that does thing on a whim more often than not. Now don't take offense because this isn't a bad thing actually: it shows that his feelings and relationships with Amy and Shadow actually mean enough to him that he doesn't want to rush into anything to fast and actualy wants to sorts things out. It shows a true majority, not only on his part but his personality and I love it.
As for the love triangle, I must say it's very interesting. Apart from what I mentioned above, it's just nice to see how Sonic reacts to each different persons advances, how Amy reacts to the boys relationship together and how Shadow reacts to well, everything as a whole. No one is reacting in the same light exactly and that's what makes the read so interesting, other than trying to figure out just who Sonic will actually end up with.
A few other points:
-Tails not spending a lot of time with Sonic isn't exactly a bad thing, as he needs to get out of his shadow a bit. But in an off sense, because he usually is with Sonic, it's somewhat out of character.
-Cream is perfect, don't change her at all. And while romance is flying all around, don't give her one with Tails. They're far to young to actually understand the complications that come with true romantic relationships.
-I like how you seem to be telling four stories at once: Sonic's love life, Knuckles & Rouge and the Master Emerald drama, Eggman and this mysterious ring and Tails Cream and Team Chaotix? drama. It's all woven together nicely and it always has a little something for different readers to enjoy.
-You story is a wee bit lengthy. This can be a good thing or a bad thing. In the beginning, it seems to drag on but as the story gets more interesting, the length doesn't bother a person as much. However, it's getting past the first chapter or two that's the trama to some readers. Most won't stick around and that's a shame because it's nice read.
I look forward to seeing how the next installment will change the story, as this last chapter dropped lots of hints of up coming drama: Knuckles wanting to leave and then sleeping with Rouge. Shadow finding out about Amy and Sonic's possibly relationship (though I still believe it's partically one sided because I doubt Sonic actually sees it in the same light as Amy, what with him still being confused on how he truly feels about either hedgehog) and seeing how he will react to this. Tails going crazy with Team Chaotix and wanting to be alone with Cream. And then there's still the matter of the ring and Eggman.
I'll be keeping tabs on this story in the future.