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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm...good! :)
some spellings, but that's okey, I guess...
some spellings, but that's okey, I guess...
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's intresting! The plot's different but... is this baby an OC that's gonna go hoping through Link's world? Just be careful with your grammer and seperate the people when the're different people talking. I would be very careful because the mother of the child sounds almost like a Mary Sue but it's your story, just be careful is all^.~
I'm really curious as to how you'll bring the babe into all of this and what role she will play in the bigger picture! Keep it up!
I'm really curious as to how you'll bring the babe into all of this and what role she will play in the bigger picture! Keep it up!