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for Seth's dilemma

by tsuneharu

person Anon
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAY! anyway, this is really badly written.
person A-Person
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's okay but I doubt all of that could have been done without an enemy hearing or seeing them. And you might want to use ' for thoughts instead of ".
person A-Person
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's not bad but, things are a bit rushed. I do hope to read more though. :)
person Anima Sage Kurai
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good. Although I don't like the Ross/Seth one
but when I read Ephy/Seth, I was like: HELL YEAH! So please
update soon!