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for Against the Grain

by Minwax

schedule June 10, 2024 at 12:00 AM

Just wanted to say that I really liked this story and it's a shame you're not going to upload anything more. I've been looking for a story like this for forever.

schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I want more please. Awsome story!
person ENDGAME
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I just KNEW someone was going to pop out with this idea and you did so beautifully. I can't wait for the next chapter!
person Irxsk
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the first chapter best, but over well written. :) I'm glad someone decided the Dahaka needs to up all up on the Prince too lol
person Jags
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS INCREDIBLE! YOU MUST WRITE MORE AND EMAIL ME WHEN YOU HAVE! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
person K-Pilot
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Donkey Punch
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There is a part of me (much larger than I would admit in polite company) that is a raging sadist. And it loves this story. I love how you've written the Dahaka. Perfect. I can't wait for more.
person Malyss
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I never would have thought of that... and I love it!! You write very well and you have a nice style. I can't wait for the next chapter (and the kinky sex that goes with it ;))
person Casandra
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next part wish there was an alret email to tell us when stories we like are updated on this site.I'll just keep coming back to check.
person Nacht Kind
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
::scratching pitiously at screen:: Mooooreee......But, honestly, I'm thrilled to have such a prompt update, dispite your claims to the contrary.

I'm glad to know my ideas were enjoyed, as I had far too much fun coming up with them. At present though, I can't think of anything to suggest, as you seem to have the immediate story well in hand.

I find the Dahaka's typical irritation at human attempts to avoid and/or thwart its efforts vastly amusing; the calculating intelligence it employs highlights the darkly predatorial aspects of its nature and emphasizes its cunning. Dahaka equals terrifying apex predator. I think if I were faced with one, after making certain I wasn't asleep or having wild, Mad Hatter Tea induced hallucinations, I'd sit down and cry.....because, I mean really?

I'm excited to see how the next chapter will progress, and to see what will ultimately happen to the Dahaka, the Prince, and the poor princess with remarkably bad timing.

Phasen sehnen sich die Inspiration!
Nacht