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for Why did He Take My Wings?

by Petrez

person xMiyux
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice work! XD I really enjoyed it!! X3
Please update soon, interesting I thought that Lloyd would've have put a more of a fight, especially what had happened to his wings. Also are you sure Mithos is a girl? I've played the game A LOT and Mithos seem to be a BOY there's no way his a girl the game screams BOY. How can he be a she, you have to be joking about him, right? I'm so confuse now 0.o"
person HEY!
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY. I DON'T KNOW IF YOU STILL NEED IT BUT TO GET KRATO'S JUDGEMENT COSTUME IS EASY. AT THE FLANOIR DOCTOR PART WHEN EVERYONE IS COMING AND ASKING YOU OUT SAY NO. THEN KRATOS WILL COME. AND LATER ON WHEN YOU GO BACK TO THE TOWER OF SALVATION AND GET HIM IN YOU PARTY HE WILL HAVE JUDGEMENT. BUT YOU HAVE TO KILL ZELOS CAN YOU DO IT?
person Anon
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lmao... Fangirls are so stupid. It's so funny how they just deny what is right in front of them, and is a real fact. Especially in the KH section.
person Anima Sage Kurai (me log in? HAHA!)
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just call me ASK for now. XD Hey, you updated! Yay for Yggy being totally horney! Lloyd! Such a chump! And yay for smut too! Hehe, I like where this is going.

Too bad for Collet. And WTF, Mithos...is a chick? I hate that boy anyway, Yggy > Mithos. They so aren't the same person. And you all know it.

Update ASAP!

~ASK~
person Invader Meow (the accountless x_X)
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY you updated! :hug:! ah yes all that i expected to happen in the last chapter, did indeed happen in this one. i still feel sorry for lloyd though, hard not to.

but it makes me wonder.. what is that cloth made from o.O'
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO

"Mithos is a girl"

I haven't heard anything so stupid in my life.
person kourya
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is well thought out! It's better than anything I could do, all my stuff is cliché. I haven't published any of it yet. ;+; But still, this chapter was really good, you're a very descriptive writer. Which is a good thing! Watch the typos though. And thanks for updating! *coughfinallycough* You did a good job! Thanks for the cookie! =^^=
- kourya
person tenohikari
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you've updated! And wow I love evil (and horny) Yggdrassil... but I can't wait to read more. Why did Kratos give his son away as a gift? Will Lloyd regain his dignity back? But most important... will there be more smut? ::nosebleeds::
person kourya
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is really sad so far, and I hope you update it soon. I like it and it's very well thought out and put together. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
~ kourya
person HEH
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome, but seriously if you have zelos killed by not accepting collett, um...that other ninja girl sheena and genis then you will get called out by kratos and he will explain about his past also give him a family pendent won't tell you why anyway once that happens he'll join your party temporaily and then leave but then come back and heres where the sacrafice comes in when you choose to listne to krotos which you don't have a choice once you rejeced the rest you haver to fight zelos in the tower and he will die then when your free kratos will be a perminet memeber of your party till you beat the game.