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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! I absolutly love this fic!!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Extremely entertained by Riku's attitude and lovin the sexy doctors! Falling in love at first sight a little cliche but from you writing I'm positive you can pull it off.
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Will Sora start talking? Will Riku stop being a jerk? *squeal* Write more!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
go on! for the love of god continue! (damn i'm bossy) ur story's reeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaallllllllyyyyy good so far.
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!! keep it up :D
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I love the idea.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The only problem I have with this story (so far): the constant typos. I mean I've seen you write before and you very rarely had any typos then ("Flames of Purgatory" and "Sin's of the Father" being prime examples of your work), so what's going on now? There is no need to rush the chapters - take your time and reread what you've typed; I can honestly say that all the typos really took away from the story. The way Riku acts is the way that the 'inner me' acts, so I particularly *LOVE* his personality in this story; but, with all the typos, it's difficult to focus on what is being said (and sometimes you use words that mean an entirely different thing from what *I* know you mean - for example, you said 'unexceptable' but I know you meant 'unacceptable' in the last chapter.) I am sure that you'd get many more reviews if you just took your time and to go through it.
I am not trying to discourage you, I am just pointing out the things that detracted from the story (at least, in my opinion). I really love the way you have written Riku, and I actually found Sora to be the one who annoys me in this fic (despite how mean that may seem...) But, I *know* you can do much better when it comes to cleaning up the typos. Regardless, I still like this idea.
I am not trying to discourage you, I am just pointing out the things that detracted from the story (at least, in my opinion). I really love the way you have written Riku, and I actually found Sora to be the one who annoys me in this fic (despite how mean that may seem...) But, I *know* you can do much better when it comes to cleaning up the typos. Regardless, I still like this idea.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well that took you long enough to update. lol. it was worth it though. interesting chapter but if it isnt to much trouble, could you kill riku? i know he is a main charecter in the story but if he ever even tried to talk to me like that then i would send him to a nice cold morge slap straight away. lol.
update soon.
XxX S.R. XxX
update soon.
XxX S.R. XxX
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! Exellent first 2 chaps. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg this is just.......sooooo fucking good *lacking better word* Please write another chapter as soon as posible!!!! and if u didnt figgure it out already i soooo love ur story.