rate_review Reviews

Hey man you got to write the chapter up soon I have to know what will come next?

It's quite interesting so far; I'm looking forward to reading more! As the first reviewer pointed out, it helps to proofread a story before you post it. You've also spelled many of the names from the OoT wrong, and as an avid fan of the game, it's disturbing. It should be Volvagia instead of Vulvaga, Malon instead of Malone, and so on. When did Mt. Doom appear in Hyrule? If you're going to use that in the story, it might help if you explain why. ^^

- The Anonymous Reviewer

It's an intresting cross-over! FF8 and LoZ:OoT, you don't see to many of those!(In fact, I've NEVER seen one of these!)
You've just a few grammer and spellings issues kinda tear you away from the story. Hyrule should have a capital 'H' and Link should have a captial 'L' as well(regardless of where ever he is in in the paragraph, it's his name). Captial 'I' whenever he's speaking of himself. Becareful of putting periods in instead of comma's. Bed instead of bead, muscles instead of mussels, ect, ect, ect...
It's good! I eagerly await to see more! *cheers you on*

A great idea/story, just too many damn errors!

Please check for those before you post a story, or at least post something saying you will correct/edit it after posting.

Continue please, just try to get the right info into the story. Also remember try to get the characters names right. (Gamefaqs, is a great place to go JSYK)