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for A Lesson in Obedience

by maiafay376

person striker
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, yet another great story from you (even though it's in the same universe as "Rare Side Effects")...

Nevertheless, there's nothing I can really say constructive crit wise... it's so well done... O_O

Keep up the great work! ^_^
person ZombieDuke(Not logged in)
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O EEEEEEEEEEIIIII!!!!! XD I was wondering when someone would do these two! Just the scene of Leon laying on the ground(in the bedroom) with the chief standing between his legs pointed to all aspects of yaoifulness!
I look forward to the sex scene! *pauses, turns red and coughs* Ah-I mean the plot! Yes! More plot please! Lotsa and Lotsa plot! *nods*