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October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay...don't quit reading just cuz of my first sentence, alright? :V
Now, quite frankly, not to be rude, I think Liquid/Otacon is incredibly weird and gross (and nonsensical, but not so much, after I read this). I'm very very picky with fanfiction and slash, not that I read tons in the first place.
That said, this fic is really amazing. You characterized Liquid and Snake incredibly well, and Otacon too, especially considering the plot. I really love love love how it fits in with Shadow Moses; it shows how much effort you put into this. It's just really the first Metal Gear fanfic I've read that I've actually enjoyed. So I want to thank you for that, sir or madame.
Lots of love, and keep writing,
projphilanthropy.
Now, quite frankly, not to be rude, I think Liquid/Otacon is incredibly weird and gross (and nonsensical, but not so much, after I read this). I'm very very picky with fanfiction and slash, not that I read tons in the first place.
That said, this fic is really amazing. You characterized Liquid and Snake incredibly well, and Otacon too, especially considering the plot. I really love love love how it fits in with Shadow Moses; it shows how much effort you put into this. It's just really the first Metal Gear fanfic I've read that I've actually enjoyed. So I want to thank you for that, sir or madame.
Lots of love, and keep writing,
projphilanthropy.
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story!
Its well written, the characters are believable and very much as you would expect them in this senario.
Top Marks! Love It!
Its well written, the characters are believable and very much as you would expect them in this senario.
Top Marks! Love It!
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
xD secret hand shake! I love it! a very well done piece, you captured the mind set with frightening accuracy!
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yey! That update was better n.n although I think it could be further written, but I don't want to pressure you Cause your work as it is is perfect. ^_^ please continue!!!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your summary doesn't even begin to do your story justice. What it fails to describe is a surprisingly deep, pathos-ridden story with an actual plot. I don't even like homoeroticism and I'm loving every word. Kudos, my man.
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh for the love of all thing cute and fluffy, FINISH THIS FANFIC!!!! O_O
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No xD Not a cliff hanger, now I have to use my imagination.. Which is somewhere stored in thousands of boxes. But this story it was exellent honestly o_o you keep getting better and better when if comes to these. ^_^ Hehe you should get persmission some how and publsh them >> but thats just me of course, I am not the smart <<