rate_review Reviews

Gotta be one of my favorite fics on this site... I enjoy all of your work, but some of your other stories are a bit more rapid-fire and orgy, which also works, you really took your time here and went more descriptive, which I think is more effective. Seriously, you should write a thousand stories like this one. As soon as possible.

I always love your stories specially the graphic cummy part. You also keeped the feeling of the game in this one. Make the wait for your next shorter, please!

Hello, I read this because it looked interesting and its Karin+Yuri. I think the Alice+Yuri couple is sweet, but I also think Karin+Yuri would be awesome if Karin wasn't related to him since I don't support incest. I've played SH 2 and beat it. Its a great game and I love it. I tried getting my friend to play but she judges the game before even playing it; sometimes she lets game reviews or silly rumors from friends rule her decisions when it comes to buying games -_- which I say is stupid because she is missing out on a great game. I've only played SH 2 but I'd love to try the first and third one. But anyway, enough of my babbling...

I read this and I like it ^_^. I printed it out so I can go back and read it anytime in case I can't find your story on the internet. You're a great writer and the lemon scene was indeed steamy and naughty ^^0. I encourage you to keep writing because you have talent. Your words were blunt but it didn't bother me. PWP are fine with me. I think you stayed in character. I like your style and I say not to let assholes or flamers discourage you. No matter how good a writer is, they can always improve. Keep up the great work!

Bye now, ^_^

Quite a nice piece of work.