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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear God in heaven, that was so weird, and absolutly frightening. But good, don't get me wrong, it was definatly well written.
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, this was WAY longer than any of my stories. But this isn't
about me. I'm glad you and Niffty24 decided to do my challange.
This was well written, I love the way you described everything.
Your writting style is really good, and you made Yggy a pervert.
Yggy is an ass, but who cares? This was sweet! 5/5!
about me. I'm glad you and Niffty24 decided to do my challange.
This was well written, I love the way you described everything.
Your writting style is really good, and you made Yggy a pervert.
Yggy is an ass, but who cares? This was sweet! 5/5!
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was gorgeous. You have an amazing way of letting the sex scenes drag out to be erotic instead of repetititive. ^_^ One thing irked me.. aren't Yuan's eyes green? They are in the game. ^^;
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I agree with the above reviewer. Heh, and after I said over in lj that all threesomes (and lemons and general) sound the same after awhile (I realized afteward that that kinda sounded rude...^^;), but you have a way with words that gives even standard smut something unique about it.