rate_review Reviews

"He drank Fayt's man juice like it was water from the fountain of youth and he was a dying old man."

When you take metaphors like that and leave them so blunt, it comes out just...ick. Be careful with that.

Very nice story I really liked it.
Hope you do more Albel/Fayt :3
That was some good lovin'

That's nice...but what did Albel have a bad dream about?...I think it was about Fayt...but good fic! do keep up the good one.

WOW! Just WoW. that was really good. I love the pairing Albel/Fayt, and believe there is not enough of them. again really good job. If you do plain to go further you might develope your people alittle more. But In my amature (sp?) opinion, I thought that was a very good opening chapter that will keep readers wondering (or at least me) what Albel thought about that whole experience or what gave him the courage to do something like that. Does Fayt think about all this in the morning. Will he think I was a very livid dream, and best yet?
And I just kinda went off. . . . sorry. Anyway hope there is more and if there isnt I look forward to your other storys.




Sorry If I never reviewed before Im just not much of a typer so I normally do review unless Im really compelled to. I really dont think its fair to you or others that work so hard and are desperitly wanting to know about the general opinion of their work but Im working on it. :)
Peaches

sorry got you mixed up with a different author, well still like the story! *shakes head in bemusement*