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Great story- I love your descriptions. All in all, this is a very cute scene. I can't help but wonder how the two ended up in bed together, though...

Wow, that's pretty much all I can say, wow, wow, and just mother fucking wow. This was a great start to what could/should be a great peice of work. The formating and spelling were excelent in my eyes, I could detect no errors. There was a great sense of depth in here, it gave you the feeling you could actualy see them, feel them.
I do hope that you may continue soon, you know, I have Porshes and Jaguars reserved to deliver to impressive authors. So, if you like fast cars, for free, without tax payments, I suggest you continue.
This is CrazyIvan, reminding you too look both ways before crossing the street, Semper Phi, carry on...

Heh, that was a pretty cute little fic. Although, I think I should point out that "voulez vous coucher avec moi" means something along the lines of "would you like to enter REM sleep with me", rather than "would you like to have sex with me." Of course, this is hardly your fault, but I'm nit-picky like that.

Also, it needs more Katt Monroe. ;)

Extremely good I love fanfics which are like yours, very subtle but has a lot of meaning behind the scenes, well done for accomplishing such a feat! The description is very vivid but not to slashy very well done, keep up the good work! 5/5