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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty fic!
...Sorry, it's too late at night for constructive critisism.
(I think his name was Shinon.)
...Sorry, it's too late at night for constructive critisism.
(I think his name was Shinon.)
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you did a great job with this! ^^ The lemon was done really well. Soren was only a little OoC, but considering the situation, his behavior really does make sense. And I love the general feeling of sweetness in here- you really did keep up the WAFF thing, didn't you? ^^ It wasn't hugely erotic or "hot"- but very sweet. Since neither of them seems to be very experienced, this mood works really well. I lurves it. ^^
And there WERE a few spelling and grammar errors, but not enough to really affect the reading ease. If you ever need a beta, let me know. ^^
Consequences, eh? Do I smell a sequel? *is hopeful*
Anyways, as I've said, I really love this. Great job, and keep up the awesome writing!
~Avi-chan
And there WERE a few spelling and grammar errors, but not enough to really affect the reading ease. If you ever need a beta, let me know. ^^
Consequences, eh? Do I smell a sequel? *is hopeful*
Anyways, as I've said, I really love this. Great job, and keep up the awesome writing!
~Avi-chan
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot hot hot! *_______*
You have made my fantasies come true!
Anyhooo, this was a really good chapter. Soren wasn't too OOC, I can imagine him in that position in the game, so it was good!
The lemon was hawt, and I love how you composed it. At first I got confused about the chair, I forgot Soren was still sitting in it until you made note about him being pulled onto the bed. xDD
Simply awesome, please write more IkexSoren fics! Yours is the only one I've read! ;-;
You have made my fantasies come true!
Anyhooo, this was a really good chapter. Soren wasn't too OOC, I can imagine him in that position in the game, so it was good!
The lemon was hawt, and I love how you composed it. At first I got confused about the chair, I forgot Soren was still sitting in it until you made note about him being pulled onto the bed. xDD
Simply awesome, please write more IkexSoren fics! Yours is the only one I've read! ;-;
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You did great! ^^ Ike and Soren make such a cute couple...but I think Soren and Oscar make a cuter couple...they are my best characters ^^ Soren is evil though ;_; He always take the boss kills by hitting a critical or his skill without gaining any exp because he's already level 20 sage. Is it just me or is Soren's eyes red...not orange? I think Ike, Ranulf, and Janaff make a cute couple too ^^
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u have to continue!! u have to sooreen I need their lemon Xd don't tease me!
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohmigosh! I think I love you! xDD
Such a lovely story, you must continue! IkexSoren are just absolutely adorable. You portrayed them so well, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Continue please, ma'am! :3
Such a lovely story, you must continue! IkexSoren are just absolutely adorable. You portrayed them so well, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Continue please, ma'am! :3
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm... Path of Radience. Not usually a yaoi fan, but I love Soren enough to read it. Nicely done.
THe archers name is Shinon, btw.
THe archers name is Shinon, btw.
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story. I can't wait for you to write more. IkexSoren is one of the pairings I discovered while playing and I'm so glad someone used it.
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...I think I love you. Seriously, though, I adore this couple beyond all belief, and this is the first fanfiction I've seen about them. You've portrayed them really well, and this really does give you a warm and fuzzy feeling. ^___________^ I really, really hope you'll update soon!
~Avi-chan
P.S. I don't think it really matters now, since it sounded fine how it was, but the red-haired sniper's name is Shinon.
P.P.S. And I'm pretty sure Soren's eyes are red, not orange, but whatever. ^^
~Avi-chan
P.S. I don't think it really matters now, since it sounded fine how it was, but the red-haired sniper's name is Shinon.
P.P.S. And I'm pretty sure Soren's eyes are red, not orange, but whatever. ^^
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Well written I must say.
As for the name of that archer? Shinon! Smexeh redhead.
As for the name of that archer? Shinon! Smexeh redhead.