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for Trusting Your Commander

by Kouun

person Prince Bananafeather
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT. WAS. AMAZING. I LOVED IT!!! Man, oh man, that was fun. Soren's just so cute! I love him! Hehe...well, you just made my day. THANK YOU~!
person fuu
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the red haired jerk is Shino... you get to re-recruit him at one point i "acidently" killed him instead ^_^ andd desided he wasnt worth restating the chapter. any way good chapter
person fuu
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oops i missed the 'n' at the end of shinon o well dont like him anyway. and soren wouldnt have been in a relationship the ONLY person he trusts is ike ... well and ikes dad but yea... if you get all their support conversations youll find out why ^_~
person Midnyte Wolf
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shiznit!

I have found chuuu!!! *worships* OMIGOODNESS!!! Do you know how long I've been aching for a little Ike on Soren intimate action here!? I long time! From the very moment I laid eyes on that GOREGOUS, SILKY, SMOOTH black head of Soren he became MY personal favorite. ^^; And with being my personal favorite comes with being paired with my second favorite! Huzzah! Thus me having an instant connection for Soren and the innocent, compassionate, bluenette Ike! Oh! I loved this chapter of the game too! It was when they got a little more... 'affectionate' with each other! It made me squeal X3. Especially the moment when the laguz sprung in to save us! Ike sacrificed himself for the hit that should have been for Soren! *faints all over again* And what's even better was how Soren got so protective afterwards! He was all, "He hurt you!" and I was all, "Yes! Defend yer future LUBBAH!!!"

I never knew my obsession with those two would EVER be stroked like that! There were just so many tiny moments that made me go... "GAWWW!!! I KNEW THEY LOVED EACH OTHER!!!" They are the sweetest things together! XDD I mean, Ike's the only one Soren is actually... lovey of! Even observent! >>; I mean, didn't he say he noticed that Ike's left EYE TWITCHES when he's tired!? O.o; If that's not checkin' him out very closely then shoot meh now!

Lol! Soren almost reminds me of my dog, in a way. My dog is so affectionate of me, travles right under my heels, and always wants to be with me- but she is the MEANEST LITTLE TURNIP to everyone else! ...It's so funny! ^^; I just love how Soren doesn't seems to open up nor except anyone else other than Ike! XD Can you say, "Hello Perfect Match!?" ...I knew you could. Soren is just so distant but it's like Ike's there to bring the relationship home and behind locked doors! *kablink* I'll reallly have to finish the game sometime soon... I REEEEALLY wanna see more! But I don't want the game to end all too soon! Leavin' meh goin'... "And Soren and Ike...?? And Soren and Ike...??" I WANT THEM TOGETHER!!!

^.^ But oh my... yer story was wonderful! ...At least so far! I WANT MORE!!! *savesavesave* I will worship this story until it is through! Through I say!! You're doing such a lovely, lovely job with it! I mean, I am about the pickiest person when it comes to fanfiction. I love people to be in character, or at least put an effort into TRYING, and I like it to remain in familiar territory most of the time- I do enjoy AU but most of the time, I'd rather not- and things have to happen normally, possibly at a timely pace. There are countless stories I have see where it's like... POOF!! MAGIC!!! how some things take place. I like it to happen and develope over time- instead of shoved in all at once. And I do like it when authors bring in the other charcters... it gives me a sense of casualty (is that a word O.o;) and it just seems normal and familiar. It makes things all the BETTAH!!! I was amazed and all, "Dude... I am TOTALLY REVIEWING!!" after reading this! I could see it happening! My points were satisfied! You are BRILLIANT!! (*needs meds*)

ILOVEYOU!!! PLEASE GIVE MORE!!! MORE. NOW. *smooches* I'll be stalking until you do! ^^ *wavewave*
person Wyvern Rider Kurogasa
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww...! Kyuuuute!!!! X3! Now I feel like getting offline and playing more of the game! :3 And I think I will! This fic rocked out loud, and I wish there'd be more to it, but oh wells. ;-; XP Rock on! >w<\w/
person R Amythest
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven't actually *liked* a lemon in a long, long time. But, the sweetness of it, the foreplay (I love foreplay for some absurd reason) and the simple fact that it's Ike/Soren just makes me squee.

Minor details: Soren's eyes are red, I think... and he IS quite OOC for the majority of chapter 2, most noticably concerning the blush. But, it makes for quite some fluff.
person T
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I just got into the Fire Emblem series and I'm glad I played that far in the game (Ch. 9), so that I wouldn't get screwed over by the spoiler. XD I think this story is so sweet, and you say that they're out of character but I don't see where, Ike seems like he'd be just as caring as he would in the game, and I think Soren's cold front must be in front of everyone else, even during battle or something if he gets killed he seems so sad to end up having to leave Ike, and he seems so worried about Ike when he's not around, so I think you did the Canon characters well. Nice little plot topped off with a smutty lemon, my type of fanfic!! ^^;; Please write more of this game, I'd be so willing to read and review more! ^^;;...Would you consider doing a fanfic between Shinon and Ike? Just a random question....We can easily pass off Shinon's pissy attitude for a hidden lust or something...hee hee! ^^
person denaia
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yaaay!! Good lemon!! ^^
Thank you!!
person Moontyger
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like it. It is an interesting take on Ike/Soren and a great story. One criticism, though - I think you use "blue-haired man" and the like too much and it is kind of distracting and breaks the flow of the story. Not that the reader doesn't need to know what they look like, but one can go overboard with it, you know? Still, I like it a lot. ^_-
person HotaruAino
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Little too lazy to log in at the moment but I love this fic. I just got into the FE games and Path of Radience peaked my interest in ways I never thought it would. I'm glad I'm not the only one who can see Soren and Ike as a couple ^_^ Hopefully you'll post more stories on aff.net cause there's not enough FE fics out there. Must spread the love of yaoi through wonderful fics like this! <3