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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I could have sworn I reviewed this. But in any case, if I did already then forgive me. I've got to say, I've found this story really amamzing and kinky! Keep up the good work, and I like the way John is portrayed in this fanfic. Amazing! Anyway, Au Revoir!
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a REALLY GOOD story and i think you should finish this story, but it would appear that you haven't logged onn in some time. If you ever get on again YOU NEED TO FINISH IT until then +++++
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!!!!! I never thought that something like that would make me horny in the slightest. But it totally did! You have to update this story! I mean I think I will die if this isnt completed. Really I will. I love it so far. Keep up the good work! ^,^
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!! please continue it!!!! oh man Arbiter and the Master Chief in the woods without clothing, so hot!!! so hot ive been burned!!!! LOVE IT!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!
and please, PLEASE email me when you get a new chapter up!!! Im diying to see how hot it gets betwen Arbiter and MC!!
and please, PLEASE email me when you get a new chapter up!!! Im diying to see how hot it gets betwen Arbiter and MC!!
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...this author must be dead or something...its been like a few months...or more... well, if they aren't dead, just to let you know, there are a lot of people waiting for you...
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...fuck, just get a new chapter in already! *falls to her knees* we're DIEING here!
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what is TAKING SO LONG!?!?!?!?!?? I love this story, but really now...
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story it's self is very well done, but the damnded "Yaoi alerts" are more pestering than you might think.
Being flamed is one thing, but when warnings make a story less interesting is when you might want to get rid of some of them.
They're only flaming you, not attempting to shoot you.
Being flamed is one thing, but when warnings make a story less interesting is when you might want to get rid of some of them.
They're only flaming you, not attempting to shoot you.
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Did'nt get to say the other half, damnded crap compy.
THe story is good, dispite what the ratings say.
Chances are, it's yaoi flamers doing it.
Continue it, cause it's one that comes ever so rarely.
A story that that just... works.
To discontinue it is like killing all who got worked up in reading it!
Just, for what i'm hoping will be continued, perfection.
10/10, nothing less.
THe story is good, dispite what the ratings say.
Chances are, it's yaoi flamers doing it.
Continue it, cause it's one that comes ever so rarely.
A story that that just... works.
To discontinue it is like killing all who got worked up in reading it!
Just, for what i'm hoping will be continued, perfection.
10/10, nothing less.
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ACK! LOL! Do it Arbiter! DO IT! LOL this is getting good! X3 Me can't wait for the next chapter!