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You have got to be kidding me. I want more.....How could you leave it there!

yay! an update

You haven't updated this in a while. Not to sound impatient, but will there be more chapters soon? I really like this story and am anxiously looking forward to reading more! :)

Very nicely written. I look forward to seeing more. :)

Promising start... I want more :)

How could you stop there!!!!

Oooh, a really good chapter! Very interesting, and promising. *Grins and applauds.* Poor Ghlariknee, good he has the Master Chief to take care of him. Perhaps he can yet get to trust the Master Chief? He will certainly be in need of a lot of tender loving care after this adventure, as will the Master Chief. Perhaps the Master Chief might get an opportunity to apologise for what he did then, heheh. *Winks.* Also, I really like how you brought in the other characters, Cortana and the Arbiter. Good job. Will be interesting to see what both has to say to the Master Chief later on. I’m really looking forward to reading a continuation of this story. Thanks for writing it! ^-^

Very good continuation! I really like this story of yours, as said before. I do hope we’ll see more character development after the fighting, though, because I feel there are still some unanswered questions. ;) Is there any connection/relationship between Ghlariknee and the Arbiter? Have the Elites just forgiven and forgotten the unfortunate episode between the Master Chief and Ghlariknee? They don’t seem to distrust him at all, and I would have thought that the Arbiter at least would have been angry. How does Ghlariknee think of it all? He is obviously frightened by the Master Chief, but will it have any further consequences? Perhaps Master Chief can make up for his lack of tact later. ;) Speaking of which, what does the Master Chief himself think of his lapse of control? Surely he can’t be happy about it. And Cortana? Is she unaware? How will she react when she finds out? I doubt she’ll be happy… I really hope we’ll see an answer to some of these questions in later chapters, because character development is what I really like about most stories. :)

;o; Don't stop writin'. I like it, even if there is no naked stuff anymore.

You mentioned if anyone wants you to continue? Well you got a vote for me from me.