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I really am enjoying this story more than I thought I would, actually. Keep up the good work...! :3

If I knew this story hadn't be updated still 2010 I would have NEVER read it cause it just makes me waiting to read more of it. And since its almost been 4yrs I'm pretty sure it's not coming to happen. But u like to get proven wrong though.

HOOoooooo. I really hope that you find time to update this again. I have not been that dissapointed in not being able to continue reading a great story in a long time and I really like how you've been developing the characters.

I didn't run away. I'm still here. Waiting for an update. Hoping. Wishing. *pouts*

Well, wouldn't know I would be here again. I finally after stumbling onto one of your stories again decided to just give up the fight, admit defeat, visit your page and check out all your other stories. Bravo, I have never played either of these games before and still am very successfully..."intrigued". You must keep going with this one, to all 9 hells with the brute hatters. I know I say that about all our writing... especially a certain Batman/Joker story that still has me taking cold showers, but wow, come on what a cliff hanger. You are by far my favorite writer. Who would have that innocently reading a Predator fic only to realize it was written by none other then you. Although I should have guessed by the once again torturous cliff hanger. Please you wonderful BlueBastard, I am at your mercy, as no other story can sedate me.

Andrea

UGH! Your authors note at the bottom pretty much summed it up. It's great to see an update though! The Brute finally has the "Demon" right where he wants him and you go and leave me with that!

Great chapter. I really hope that I will see a new chapter soon!

Please keep up the good work. ^_^

I enjoy this story and hope that you will update soon!!!

this... oh man. I've just read it from start to here in one day! i couldn't put it down~ I love how cannon you keep them and I'm really intrigued about the planet they've landed on! I can't wait to read more! I hope you post again soon <333

I'm not a usual member on here and if you're still offering those email updates, I'll take it <3

I just read the whole story and this can't be done! The story needs to conclude so keep up the writing. A lot of us want to see where this leads! I'd say this is my favourite fanfic for any series


PS. The brute stuff didn't scare me off, I liked it ;)

Never would have thought of that pairing, but I adore your story - how you made it into non-con and still not. Hope they get to save Master Chief before this elite gets what he wants. Want the Master Chief after one of those showers for myself :) Hope to read more soon.