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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ouch... this is just wrong
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is terrible! The writing could be a bit better but to make this because youhate the character? Thats very immature.
Besides that it was a little funny. Shame the characters were out of character! True She might be a whiny but Dart would never act like that. Nor would Albert have men rape a woman no matter how annoying she is.
Besides that it was a little funny. Shame the characters were out of character! True She might be a whiny but Dart would never act like that. Nor would Albert have men rape a woman no matter how annoying she is.
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.o wow, Just slightly over doing it thereon the Shana hateing no?
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are a one sick, retarded person!! But then again, I LOVE it! LOL I know. I'm weird but I really like N/C and anals and double penetrations...Anyhow, please keep up the good work!! I love your one-shots and I'll keep on checking to see if there are any new stories. Sick and retarded,
Lee
Lee
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story sucks...it's sad how some people get off on posting crap like this -_-
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dude that was so awsome but shana isn't that bad
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
better yet i take it back ur a asshole cause i like shana and u can go sit in ur own little world and get raped like shana did
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was terrible. -_-0
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's just a GAME!!!!!! The People are not real they are made up, and Who gives a fuck.Wh olike Shana or who hates here. There is always going to be a pain in the ass female or male, (or may be both.) in a game... so unless your going to make your owe fucking video game then fuck off and get over it. And don't play the game or just don't use that person in the game. Like I said IT'S JUST A FUCKING VIDEO GAME!!!!!! GET OVER IT!!!!! Every one has a good ponit but why waste time on hating something that IS NOT REAL!!!!! God you people are so fucking....Damn it. and Rape is some thing that you should NEVER WISH to happen to someone. (real or not) RAPE is not COOL. All MALES who Rape shouls have their Dick ripped/cut off.
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
READ to tell they sucked? Oh. REVIEWED to tell they sucked.
Isn't it that the best tool a writer could have is a critic?
Oh, and I am NOT the one who "launched four messages of hate in a freaking row".
Sometimes, we don't agree with other people who "hate" other people in games. Do we? Never.
Why the hell did we read it to just yell at the person? Because the dumbass got our freaking attention, dumbass! Oh, and why the HELL did YOU read it? EH? Why did you bother criticing on US? Eh?
By the way: I've seen a fic where MERU gets raped, yet it's not out of hate. And no one has yelled for it. Could you not have made it more like that?
Oh yeah, one more thing: what is up with all the gore in the fic?
Isn't it that the best tool a writer could have is a critic?
Oh, and I am NOT the one who "launched four messages of hate in a freaking row".
Sometimes, we don't agree with other people who "hate" other people in games. Do we? Never.
Why the hell did we read it to just yell at the person? Because the dumbass got our freaking attention, dumbass! Oh, and why the HELL did YOU read it? EH? Why did you bother criticing on US? Eh?
By the way: I've seen a fic where MERU gets raped, yet it's not out of hate. And no one has yelled for it. Could you not have made it more like that?
Oh yeah, one more thing: what is up with all the gore in the fic?