rate_review Reviews

I liked the way you played up the eroticism without crudely jumping into a rough tangle of sex; however, the start was a bit slow and for someone without prior knowlegde of these characters it might be a little hard for them to get into the story. It is still well written and you need to finish the bloody thing!

Another good chapter. I liked the way you introduced the characters, yet it still seems a little unclear with the plot movement. I know where you're going, but if I had just stumbled on this fic I most likely would lay it down until there was a clear development in the story. Keep it up and I'm sure you will get a large fanbase. Just keep going and move!