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I'm not spamming, Streti, my reviews keep on disappearing. Don't know what the deal with that is, it doesn't happen to most of my reviews, just a few of them. Anyway:

This story was really funny, and really hot... right up until the point where Mia casually suggests infanticide. My dick went limp right then and there, no exaggeration. What the heck was that bit all about, anyway? The story is pure awesome aside from that, but really!

Wow. That was...crazy. Now, I have a feeling I'm getting to the end of the GS section, and I still haven't found my favorite couple...

"They had a lot of meat with them thanks to all the monsters they had been slaying, but less in the way of fruits and berries, although they had some Nuts." Priceless. You could have stopped the fic right there and it would still have been awesome. "Issac had found a bush with berries he hadn't seen before" is a bit more subtle, but pretty hilarious nonetheless.

The contraception mentioning is a problem though, make no mistake. It seems like most PWP fanfic writers out there have some compulsive need to bring up birth control. Has our generation been thoroughly brainwashed by the contraception industry, or what? It makes these fanfics read like long advertisements for condoms. Anyway, there's no point in giving it mention; if don't want the woman to get pregnant, she won't.

Other than that, I liked this one. Unlike most PWP tales, it succeeds in being very, very funny indeed.

Another great fic from the best damn GS writter out there! I really enjoyed this one, but I loved the little bit out humour at the end 'cause it seemed so right.

Have you ever though of doing a Jenna/Isaac?

must have berries.
With love; Imasuky Lomae

Your writing has a style that seems laden with energy. Every event that happens is brought about with _enough_ credibilty (relatively spreaking) and zest to make it seem like these characters are there at a time when the world is their oyster... Reviews are the places for requests, aren't they? I'm curious about how you'd write a plot-based story with an adult rating. It's just that I can imagine this style making something quite fun, and there's not much in the Golden Sun section that's very well written besides PWP (as opposed to stories to read for a laugh, to make you think, for angst etc with adult themes), and you seem like one of the best authors with this lively style... *Sigh* It's just a request, for even a short experimental thing, even though you just seem to be into... If it's not what you want to write, forget I asked.

Interesting. That's about all I can say. I'd have laughed in the end though if Garet and Ivan were spying on them...

Thanks for the comments, everyone!

Mikaa, there's a couple on my site, http://wettermargin.tripod.com . The contraceptive Psyenergy was actually carried over from Homecoming. It does sound a bit easy doesn't it, but on the other hand, Psyenergy is pretty powerful and handy, and not as limited as usual RPG magic. More fics? Huh... well, I would be lying if I said I had no plans. Not much for Golden Sun though. Mainly, I should write a short ending to Homecoming.

Anon, perhaps if I get another Golden Sun idea for a single pairing, but it might get a bit repetetive unless I paired him someone else than Mia.

Daedalus, the thought crossed my mind but didn't make it into the story... they'd probably have ended up joining Isaac and Mia! :P

As for Riii, it never hurts to ask. It's not actually a bad idea. I don't know if I'll be writing more Golden Sun anytime soon, but I'll certainly take the request into consideration. Don't be surprised if it takes a year to come up with anything about it, though!

*^_^* That was... wow. Could you write a different story where Garet's the main male character?

Ahh... very tasty, I like it! That was very satisfying reading, I hope you write more!