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by Breech_Loader

person bogey654
schedule November 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
@ person who likes rouge: FUCK YOU. This fic is epic. Knuckles cleary is crazy at being a LONER hence the title. He needed a realease. And amy saw him as a friend who has saved her in the past. And rouge did have a point: she was the catlyst for knuckles and amy's make up. WELL WRITTEN! Gr8 fic.
person motherfucker
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll fuck your mother.
person renee
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kunckes is hot I wish I was amy right now. Anyway great fanfic bestone I read so far
person Anon
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this. I'd love to read about what Amy does when she goes back to town. I know you said it was done, but can you make an exception? Would she tell? What would her friends say? Continue it or I'll fuck your mom.
person Person who likes Rouge
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is a joke right? It must be cos something this bad couldn't ever be serious. I mean you have used the "rape turns to tru wuv" cliche, you've never actually explained why Knuckles was insane and you have made the whole rape thing completely incomprehendible.

Amy would be bleeding and in pain for a long time and if the rapes were as serious as you portray them she would probably end up incontinent and incapable of physical intimacy with anyone particularly her rapist. And no matter how screwed up her rapist was, clearly not very as he became sane quite soon, she would not forgive him so quickly after being raped for 3 days with him completely unhearing to her cries.

If he did become sane he would probably feel extremely depressed and suicidal for what he had done and in this story he just says sorry like having a former friend forcibly and violently have intercourse with you and leave you in excruciating pain is nothing, really.

And to top it off you have shown your fanbrattish hatred of Rouge continually calling her a slut and making her the villain despite her having no real point in the story. That kind of "I hate this character so I'm going to write her as a bitch" idea really shows me what kind of IQ you have(under 90.)

I'm hopeful that this is actually a parody despite you not having written it in the summary. Otherwise....I think you are not old enough to write on this website.
person Romance
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its was a good story but u should have add another part of them was a heart-filled good scene between i re-newed knux and a forgiving amy.
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool
person ummm?
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is not very deep but i still like it. short sweet and to the point very nice
person ???
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My body froze after I read it.
person ???
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was great.