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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so unbelievably hot. I pray you have a follow-up or sequal to this. You have now made Sagat/Vega my new favorite Street Fighter couple
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...dude. That was amazingly fucking deliciously hot. The detail, eee. om nom nom.
the end slap on the ass... priceless. I loved it. XD
the end slap on the ass... priceless. I loved it. XD
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow...didn't expect to think of sagat that way...but that was not too bad...no, that was really good...
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done! You should be really prowd of this story. It was well written, I could read it and understand the majority of what you were saying, and the sex scene was almost getting me going.
The one thing I would have to say against you (and it has nothing to do with the story) is that you need to proof read your work. Nothing dramatic, just a few things missing here or there. So if u do a little tidying, I will definately say that it is one of the better stories I have seen here.
By request, I'd like to advertise you and your work on my journal, so people can read your work. It isn't selling your stories, it is selling u as an author. Email me and tell me what you think. All the best,
shikiblade
The one thing I would have to say against you (and it has nothing to do with the story) is that you need to proof read your work. Nothing dramatic, just a few things missing here or there. So if u do a little tidying, I will definately say that it is one of the better stories I have seen here.
By request, I'd like to advertise you and your work on my journal, so people can read your work. It isn't selling your stories, it is selling u as an author. Email me and tell me what you think. All the best,
shikiblade
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree, Vega was too easy. But still, HOTT!! X9
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a really good first attempt. My only nitpick is that Vega would have put up much more of a fight before letting a man like Sagat touch him. Other than that it was very well-written and smutty. Keep up the good work!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! I have one tiny gripe, Vega definately would've made snotty remarks as to Sagat's looks. I think he's hot but Vega probably would never lay a hand on him, unless he found a perverse nature in messing with Sagat; which is what I was thinking throughout the sex scene. Sagat was hot as hell in this fic, Great story!!
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