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by Liriana

person Sea-EnigmaDare
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi..Sugoi...^_^ . It was so touching and i have to agree with Vergil , Dante is quite loud as i could hear him even from here :P.
Great job :hug:.
person PoutyKitten
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really GREAT! I can't wait to read what's next. I know that you'll get much better as you write. MEOW! (that's a promise). Keep it up, 'kay. LoL. ^_^
person cas (2 damn lazy 2 log)
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! THERE IS MORE TO THIS! YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES! ~is very happy~ That was shexy. It's okay that it wasn't as good as you wanted it. You shall get better! Trust me, I was WAy worse. XD Yours is awesome for a first time, ya? Awesome! Keep up the great work! ~thumbs-up~
person person
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome! Great work. ^_^ Way yummy.