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for Zelda: Ocarina of Time - Malon Lon Milk

by Streti

person Pat4pat
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very hot :) And very well written! It was a joy to read.
person fan
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Verry nice work. Interesting concept. Really spiced things up.
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Something about a leaky girl just is incredibly sexy. To me, anyway. ;)

Let's have more milky stories, eh?
person Bob
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't understand. This is based 2 years after OOT so Link is 12 (being sent back in time by Zelda at the end to reclame his lost childhood). And Malon is 10! you should fix the intro to being 9 years later.
person Streti
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Read the description again. It's two years after Ganon's defeat with a naturally grown up Link.
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if this has been explained, but physically, Malon couldn't be lactating unless she was either prgenant, or was having a hysterical pregnancy. Hysterical pregnancy is when a woman believes they are pregnant when they are not, their bodies react as though they were pregnant.

Perhaps mentioning if she was pregnant or having a hysterical pregnancy might have helped.
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool story. Love that pairing.
person Fenrir7139
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Very nice. +++++.
person Fairycat
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa...this is a very interesting story. Now I can't get the image of Malon being a cow out of my head. :) All in all, I liked the story. It was well written and orignal. Something that is hard to find on fanfic sites now a days. Well done.
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was so incredibly awesome!! XDDD