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for Suikoden IV - Deadline

by Streti

person Ace
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice experiment! Lemons don't need to be ten pages long to be great.
I believe your strength in writing is that you're so friggin good at describing things.
Unfortunately in this fic you can't get much room for it as it's so short. It's still a great fic though.
I wish I remember what Perrault looks like. Keep it up pal!