rate_review Reviews

i loved it please update soon

that was lovely. You kept in character and everyhting. that is how they both would have acted, except dante would have cheesy lines. ;)

Awww...
Your depiction of Lady is very acurate, which is something i like. I 'm not very fond of bad portrayel's or OCC.
And Dante is.... Adorable... I actually find this really cute and entertaining. This little cat and mouse game. You should keep it up. It's nice to see them iteracting in what would be considered normal and not all SEX.SEX.SEX... Which is something i doubt Lady would jump into that quickly. No i really like this story. Your character depictions are very well done, as well as there interaction and the progress of the story( even if it advances every holiday and such). We need more Dante and Lady fics like this. Were they actually act like themselves...
Good work!!!! Keep it up!!! ( ^ - ^)

say..what happened to lady??

Oh wow it's liie a domination rape! yummmyyyy!

woah. That is a change of pace from sweet to rape with m/m. O.O wowzer! (is tramautized)

It's great, gonna be anymore yaoi? Even if Dante seems to hate Vergil so much still.

so what happens? :( now that lady rejects dante? dante goes to his sibling and virgil comforts him in a sexual way? sounds desperate and OOC for dante O_O but sexy for us twincest readers. :)

heres an idea';) maybe since he couldnt get lady he gets messed up in the head and the fight with his brother turns him on! Meh. I'm not good with plots if we stayed in character from the game. :( its better to just do your own licensed artistic thing away from the real series.

Another sweet luvrely chapter ^^ Dante is always sweet. Remember when Lucia and Trish were crying a lot at the end of 1 and 2? He consoled them and both told them devils never cry, so hes got a very sweet streak. Awww. Keep going with this.