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for A Rose And A Thorn

by Breech_Loader

person Shadow fan
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE HAVE SHADOW RAPE amy rose IN THE NEXT CHAPTER. I HATE amy rose TO THE VERY END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF YOU DO WANT TO DO THAT PLEASE HAVE ROUGE THE BAT BEAT THE LIVING HELL OUT OF THAT DAMN amy rose. *CURSES FOR THE NEXT TEN MINUTES BECAUSE OF amy rose*.... I LOVE YOUR STORIES MAN!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
person The Empress
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amy.....*shaking her head* You are a friggin' idiot for doing that. I mean, what the fuck! Oh well, I can't wait to see how this works out. ^_^
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dang, I guess that glitch got to this fic. And it was one of my favorites too. :(
Anyways, Chapter 11 was great and very sad to say the least. I hope that everything turns out to be ok with Shadow and Amy.
Can't wait for the next chapter. ;)
person MaddiChan
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dunno if my review was gone or not but let me resay:

I actually really hate Shadow/Rose stories but you have done a good job of changing my mind. That's just how great you both write. I had wanted you to write a good Shadow/Sonic fic but I've found one (hooray). Though I STILL would love to see what you could do with that pair.

Thanks, because your story really rocks. I love it and the last chapter made me want to cry.

person Ano
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far. So what if some people don't like the way your plot line is going. I love it. Keep up the magic
person Koey Heades
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(sob) This story continues to make fear love.
person RAW19
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
shadow i'm not scared of. waiting for updates is the scary part. i was freaked when i cream was almost raped. i definetly didn't see it coming. the fight scene with shadow was cool though. are sonic and shadow eventually going to trade blows? can they be in super form then? that's hardly ever done! is knuckles coming back for more? update soon!
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A triumph as always. Please continue, I am curious to know what impact this latest development will have on future events in this fic.
person CBM
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool story.
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmmm......
I'm no good with reviews, or mail (I think I sound like a stalker or something whenever I read them), but what the hell

A fic that sucsessfully adds graphic sex scenes without making the sex the most inportant part of the story while becomming addictive.
Lets see if I understand this:
Shadow is slowly turning into a hero character without losing his darker self (Especially in the recent addition, I personally figure that rapists need to publically have their 'equipment' removed with a wooden spoon)
Sonic is filtering between a lost soul (depressed) and a vengefull lunatic (Hoping that Shadow was raping Amy) and a lovesick man (Dove into Rogue's game with the utmost sincerity)
I think most of the sucess of this artwork stems from the fact where your only taking minimal steps twoards a more sinister plot while focusing on the domestic advances of the characters, to the poinjt where were going to be suprised when the shit really does hit the fan. If everybody did buisness like you, I'd have none, and so would most the authors on this damn site
I'm going to read the whole damn thing again, thinking to myself that there is just no fucking way that I could write a fic in the Sonic genre that people would read and respond as much as they do for this. I'm not upset though, I'm glad that 'upstarts' like me could be shot before trying, since the blow came from something as wonderfull as this. (But don't think I won't try in the near future)
Looking forward to whatever comes out of this next


So when the hell is the next chapter coming up? Please tell me the supposed sequel comes out much later than this