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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmmmmmm...
Ouch... You had sonic lose controll and force himself on Amy, and Shadow lost controll and nearly killed him, and Amy got to attack Sonic (...I suppose the hammer could be down there...)
Another reasion why I love this fic, your main character isn't in any way shape or form untouchable. He Shadow nearly killed his rival, and nearly got killed doing so. He's gonna need more than stitches from that incident.
That preg warning you gave...Now I'm wondering if Amy got knocked up durring that scene... if so, Shadow needs to run into Sonic with a wooden spoon, but I'm not the author of this so it's not my call, that decision belongs to two genuises hard at work, not an upstart.
Another fucking good addition to this fic, you two know how to make it all work.
Ouch... You had sonic lose controll and force himself on Amy, and Shadow lost controll and nearly killed him, and Amy got to attack Sonic (...I suppose the hammer could be down there...)
Another reasion why I love this fic, your main character isn't in any way shape or form untouchable. He Shadow nearly killed his rival, and nearly got killed doing so. He's gonna need more than stitches from that incident.
That preg warning you gave...Now I'm wondering if Amy got knocked up durring that scene... if so, Shadow needs to run into Sonic with a wooden spoon, but I'm not the author of this so it's not my call, that decision belongs to two genuises hard at work, not an upstart.
Another fucking good addition to this fic, you two know how to make it all work.
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fakeing it really was great.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rouge that ill mannered "ho ho hor"! Damn Rouge! How heartless could she be? Taking advantage of shadow like...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'd never been so agrevated in my life. And as for Shadow, I'd with there were more loyal people in the world, (excluding myself).
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Forgive me for not logging in,
I've got to say there are .not. very many Shamy fictions out there that are actually .good. They're usually some sort of horrible, grammatically impaired one shot. This one blows Sonamy fandom out of the water!
*Favorites this Story!*
The entire fiction was incredible, especially the sex scenes. Every paragraph had me zoned so far into it that I couldn't stop reading if I wanted to.
And by the by, the line "The storm above them raged harder, as if jealous of their passion." is .GENIUS.
Thanks for an incredible read-
-Skittle
I've got to say there are .not. very many Shamy fictions out there that are actually .good. They're usually some sort of horrible, grammatically impaired one shot. This one blows Sonamy fandom out of the water!
*Favorites this Story!*
The entire fiction was incredible, especially the sex scenes. Every paragraph had me zoned so far into it that I couldn't stop reading if I wanted to.
And by the by, the line "The storm above them raged harder, as if jealous of their passion." is .GENIUS.
Thanks for an incredible read-
-Skittle
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it's gonna take me a while to wipe the splooge off the screen.
I didn'y even know Big could be that smart.
I didn'y even know Big could be that smart.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don't make Rouge look like a slut.Please on the next chapter make Rouge a good person. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEAAAASE. Rouge has been raped by Shadow in Date Rape and Killed in Luner. Please give her a break!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love your story but please give Rouge a break. Dang I sounding like a girl that got pregnat and is begging for something!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey losers no jk, butthat seems the international name for just abotu every one in school for every one around them, it's funny as hell , IM SO HAPPY THIER BACK TOGETHER< IT MAKES ME LIEK AWWWWWW HOW CUTE?!?!?! plus the fact it annoys my friend susie, she sooooo love shadow and hates amys guts, so just think of what happens when she sees a shad amy fic, you should its friggin hilarious! any way of course me little old inocence, actulaly read through the whoel thign. (still kinda kreeped out beond repair) it was liek good i guess, i mean its the second one i have ever read so i m not totaly sure iif thats whats supposed to happen.... so we pretty much knwo theres junna be a umm fucking scene next chapter, but with who, and wy will shadow fans liek it? oh and by the way wh yis ur names forggy and harley, do they have any special meanign to them?? i mean are u a frog and are u a motercycle from the brand harely? i swear i got molly today for the upteinth time, so i m sotarting to debate to change my name to molly liekon my certificate. well i hope you guys enjoy you writtign, ill be sure to er ummmmmmmmm i dunno ac\tually i dunno what to type....
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this story (as well as the others you've been writing and updating) and have to say that I like this one the best. Not for the sex, but the well thought out story and intereactions between the characters, which is something that is a bit rare in a Sonic adult story (or any other story of this genre for that matter).
I haven't gotten into a story of this nature this deeply since Nowhere Man's 'My Life With You' (which is still on a cliffhanger).
I just thought I'd register properly to give you my thoughts on what a great job you've done writing this, as well as to mention that I'm feeling a little bit inspired to write one or two of these myself as well. :3
Keep up the wonderful work, because I am definitely looking forward to the update.
I haven't gotten into a story of this nature this deeply since Nowhere Man's 'My Life With You' (which is still on a cliffhanger).
I just thought I'd register properly to give you my thoughts on what a great job you've done writing this, as well as to mention that I'm feeling a little bit inspired to write one or two of these myself as well. :3
Keep up the wonderful work, because I am definitely looking forward to the update.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
theres no ther way to put this but......you rock at intense romantic moments XD i love this fic!! keep up the awesome job! ~.^
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well after having read this story just recently, I must say, it was worth the read, you guys do an incredible job of breaking the stereotypical Shadow/Amy fanfiction.
The first thing I noticed when I read this story was that it actually had some PLOT! seriously, too many stories on AFF have no plot, and are composed entirely of senseless sex over and over and over again. This story actually sticks closely to the characters and their internal and external conflicts. Another thing I noticed about this story was the grammar and spelling. Not much to say here, it's good, readable, and actually legible for once, kudos to you guys for keeping it clean. As for the content itself, I'm not much of an angst reader, usually it ends up as some really stupid and pointless wannabe emo angst that 13 year olds and illiterate high school cheerleaders write. This time around, it's actually over something important instead of mindless stupidity like the wrong jelly on toast or something. Finally, as my last point of review; the dialogue. the dialogue itself makes a lot of sense, and is kept free of cliche'd character lines or clumsy wording, and is very close to the personality of the speaker. You guys keep it to the point, and don't wander much, but you're not blunt about it, it's actually believeable. As for the sex portions of the dialogue, you guys get a gold medal for making it look good. Usually you end up with a faked out romance novel sex scene where they spend 3 pages describing the guy's dick, and how engorged and pulsating it is, and how much the girl can feel her soul yearning for him. *fights urge to puke* But unlike most fanfics, you guys keep it simple and believable, yet again, and don't clutter it with absolutely every pinpointed little detail. Now for the downsides, the only problems I find with it is every now and then something either doesn't make sense, or doesn't fit with all 15 storylines out there and such things, but that's a minor detail, and you can't please everybody. All in all, you guys get a 9.4/10
The first thing I noticed when I read this story was that it actually had some PLOT! seriously, too many stories on AFF have no plot, and are composed entirely of senseless sex over and over and over again. This story actually sticks closely to the characters and their internal and external conflicts. Another thing I noticed about this story was the grammar and spelling. Not much to say here, it's good, readable, and actually legible for once, kudos to you guys for keeping it clean. As for the content itself, I'm not much of an angst reader, usually it ends up as some really stupid and pointless wannabe emo angst that 13 year olds and illiterate high school cheerleaders write. This time around, it's actually over something important instead of mindless stupidity like the wrong jelly on toast or something. Finally, as my last point of review; the dialogue. the dialogue itself makes a lot of sense, and is kept free of cliche'd character lines or clumsy wording, and is very close to the personality of the speaker. You guys keep it to the point, and don't wander much, but you're not blunt about it, it's actually believeable. As for the sex portions of the dialogue, you guys get a gold medal for making it look good. Usually you end up with a faked out romance novel sex scene where they spend 3 pages describing the guy's dick, and how engorged and pulsating it is, and how much the girl can feel her soul yearning for him. *fights urge to puke* But unlike most fanfics, you guys keep it simple and believable, yet again, and don't clutter it with absolutely every pinpointed little detail. Now for the downsides, the only problems I find with it is every now and then something either doesn't make sense, or doesn't fit with all 15 storylines out there and such things, but that's a minor detail, and you can't please everybody. All in all, you guys get a 9.4/10