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for A Rose And A Thorn

by Breech_Loader

person Koey Heades
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Not a bit of happyness at all. What happened in this chapter is as f!#$ up as that last episode of fullmetal alchmist. PLEASE don't let Shadow die. PLEASE let Rouge know what happened and PlEASE if Amy loses her job find her a better one.
person ???
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sonic raping Amy sort of made me sad.
person Marina
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...That's so dramatic...Wonderful writing, really, really wonderful. I hope Shadow lives!!! Don't let Rouge continue to be such a bitch...please!!! PLEASE LET SHADOW LIVE............................i'm going now.
person Xtra
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. Most stories are just "We're horny, let's have sex", but you have real emotions and feelings. Also, you show the darker side of Sonic, something most people don't touch. You're both doing a great job on this, and I hope that you two work together again.
person A fan of the series Sonic
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I changed my name. Guess what for.

I see you played the game Shadow the Hedgehog. I hope you liked it.

But about that rape... I thought this wasn't supposed to be Sonic raping Amy? Remember that you told me why? Did you changed your plans about the sequel you said you'll make?

The chapter is great. And you truly know how to make a fight. But Amy's job is again in trouble...

But I have one complaint. Not about the fic, mind you.

I know that fanfiction.net has some stupid rules. But it's not because of one idiot that all of it is crap. I'm myself a writer on that site, and I feel offended for the insult.

But I don't ask you to be sorry. I'm sure you have your reasons for it.

Just remember next time that there's a good pack of good authors that post on this site, since it's the biggest repertoy for fanfics.

person Koey Heades
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(shiver) You. People. currupted. My. Mined. (shiver).
person Mel-the-Hybrid
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..Wow, that last chapter caught me totally off guard! My goodness! Again, this story just gets better and better. I find myself checking AFF.net everyday to see if you guys added more in. Keep up the good work!
person Sol Ryuker
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A Rose And A Thron has got to be the best Shadow X Amy fanfic ever made, You wrote all the right reactions the characters would have if that happen in a sonic game "based on their personalty traits you got it down to a tee". The part when sonic started to rape amy i kept saying to myself "I already know whats gonna happen sonic is gonna rape amy and leave her tramatized then after that shadow would find out and track down sonic only for them to fight like normal people and then rouge would deliver a killing blow claiming that she wanted revenge for shadow rapeing her" but nope you made shadow catch sonic in the act then the fight totaly felt sonicy in other words was perfect and the ending to that chapter was perfect!Im begging you please continue the suspense is killing me!
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So the rape finely comes. I have to say that this turned out to be very good. I hope that everything turns out alright with Shadow. (let sonic die for what he's done). :P

Anyways, that sucks that someone might be copying your fic. I hate it when people do that.
Good luck on the next chapter. ;)
person Samantha
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I can't believe Sonic will actually rape Amy (even though you did mention about it a few chapters back, so I was expecting it). I thought Sonic wanted to protect her from Shadow because he was dangerous, but now it seems like Sonic the one Amy should really stay away from, even after what he did to her. I feel so sorry for her, she seems so fragile and helpless. =( And I really admired Amy for not telling Sonic where Shadow is, even when Sonic was trying to force her to tell him by abusing and raping her she still didn't give in.

And I bet that Amy got pregnant later on, and not knowing if Sonic or Shadow is the father? Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^