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Thank you so much for updating!

Please update again soon. Please! ::Gives biggest chibi eyes known to man and demon kind)

Damn, now I feel sorry for everybody. Just when I was hating Sonic, this chapter goes and actually make me feel sorry for him. Shame on Rouge! That !!!

Another great chapter and I hope the baby is Shadow's. And Rouge gets her upcomings.

(P.S. to Harley: You are SO right about what you said in your author notes before this chapter. That's why I stopped writing for that website for a while...)

holey shit it was a fight. HOW AWSOME!! ILOVE FIGHTS!!!! i liek the whole fact sonic was beaten to a pulp, btu i cna't show this to susie once again due to the fact,
A)its a shad amy
and
B) shadow was mortaly wound
shed kill me, u and probably any oen with i na ten mile radius

That was the greatest. I mean you have me on the edge of my seat with every new chapter hungry for more. You are the best. All of the feelings going on here it's just overwelming. I can't wait to see what happens next. You truely are a pro at what you do. Keep on going for it. The suspence is killing me.

1/4 of the child being Sonic's. 3/4 of the child being Shadow's. AND COME ON, LET SHADOW LIIIIVE. I the childs a girl. Great Chapter, other than the tragedy ( almost sob ). And ROUGE had the nerve to sudgest an abortion. Hell. And don't let Shadow die, let that be a New Years Resolution.

Oh wow. Now it's getting quiet interesting. Shadow...dying?

While that prospect has been touched upon for him since SA2, I have to say, this is more realistic because you actually see him getting frail and struggling to hold on rather than having to assume the worst has happened. I thought it was wonderful with the way you ended the chapter with his life just hanging by a thread.

I also think it's great that you've instilled somewhat of a sense of guilt in Sonic for what he did to Amy. At least we know that he still has a sense of between what's right or wrong. I was genuinely shocked by what he did in the previous chapter, which almost drove me to hate him in this story.

But now, I'm not entirely sure as you have him almost regretting what he did to her in this latest chapter...

As for Rouge, I'd say you can't really hate or like her at the moment; she at was reasonable to show up to check up on Shadow, being that the lies she told Sonic resulted in that mess...but also suggesting to Amy to get an abortion in the same breath?

Just wow. I'll be waiting for further developments on that.

And also, I just wanted to drop by and say that I uploaded the first chapter to my first adult oriented story here, and wanted to thank you once again for being an inspiration into finally putting it into motion.

Wow. I hope Shadows ok. And Amys child, Thats kind of scary. Even though it would seem more like shadows child, this is a fan fic so it could go anyway. Who knows if it's sonic's child. Looking forward to the next chapter. ;)

Yes... There is a massive number of noobs at fanfiction.net, just by looking at the spelling... But even if sometime it could be a little better, some of them have great idea that just make people smiling. And of course, there's some fics who are great work. Reviewers can also have strange tastes... But usually, a reviewer who loggd in to review will give a good review.

Still, I'll never understand why noobs don't bother to spell-check. English is not my first language, and it seems I write at least two times more better than them... another mystery of the universe...

For the fic now...

The chapter was great. And Sonic finally seem aware of the shit he has done. I know he can be a moron sometimes, but he's still good at heart.

But please, don't you think enough shit has happened? I mean, I know a fic must keep the readers waiting for the next chapter, but does it means they must always have more and more problems? Beside, I'm pretty sure Shadow is alive, and that Amy's baby is from Shadow. You can't be mean enough to kill Shadow and let Sonic be the father, right?

...

Right?

does preg stand for pregnant? oh my god! rape, attempted murder, broken knees, and maria?! that was some messed up shit! and i can't wait for the next part!

I've followed this story for three months and haven't reviewed once... that's sad.

Let's see... The portrayal and development of Shadow & Amy (and more recently Soinc and Rouge) are brilliantly done. It never ceases to amaze me how you've taken a flat character like Amy and a an attributively twisted character like Shadow and migled them together so well. Soinc's naivety makes for many hilarious moments and Rouge's craftiness creates a lot of suspense. In short, this story has everything: Romance, drama, humour, and suspense.

The plot of this story is incredible. The twists keep the story engaging and the insights into the characters thoughts keeps one informed, yet begging for more.

Top notch work, Harely and Froggy. I'll stop now before I start rambling and my review sounds too forced and constrained.