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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice ending. Well, i'm going to read the second fic. ;)
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Breech, Hi James, it's me Fairy.
I'm obviously going to review now, because I thought I had skipped that epilogue, but I didn't.
Your story is well put together and flows nicely along. I wouldn't really consider it as "NC-17" even though there is sex, it's not that hardcore, but a story doesn't have to hardcore to be good, does it? I guess the first time I stumbled on your story, it was by accident, but I'm glad I did. This story may lack figuartive lanuage but it really looks like you explore the personality of each main character, from Amy, to Shadow, to Sonic and Rouge (who are main). It made it seem that you dug into Amy's head and exposed all her inner thoughts, including Shadow at the time he was nearly dead in that hospital. You just have away of keeping your readers interested (even me, who has a very short attention span). And you are right a bit. From all the ShadAmy stories I read, this one is very original. Mostly, it's either after they are married or after Sonic Heroes.
You also make the characters contary to their usual personality, like Sonic. I wouldn't think you two would acutally make Sonic rape Amy. That was superb, you caught me off guard there, like a good writer should do. I'm so amazed at the way you make this story simple but elegant and intresting. You notice you don't go into unnersscary detail, you two just went straight into it. I think it's called "beating around the bush."
Even though there is no solid plot to your story (maybe the end), I enjoyed reading it. It most have taken months to finish it and you two surely put some hard work into you. Thank you both for the great story that I enjoy reading.
I'm obviously going to review now, because I thought I had skipped that epilogue, but I didn't.
Your story is well put together and flows nicely along. I wouldn't really consider it as "NC-17" even though there is sex, it's not that hardcore, but a story doesn't have to hardcore to be good, does it? I guess the first time I stumbled on your story, it was by accident, but I'm glad I did. This story may lack figuartive lanuage but it really looks like you explore the personality of each main character, from Amy, to Shadow, to Sonic and Rouge (who are main). It made it seem that you dug into Amy's head and exposed all her inner thoughts, including Shadow at the time he was nearly dead in that hospital. You just have away of keeping your readers interested (even me, who has a very short attention span). And you are right a bit. From all the ShadAmy stories I read, this one is very original. Mostly, it's either after they are married or after Sonic Heroes.
You also make the characters contary to their usual personality, like Sonic. I wouldn't think you two would acutally make Sonic rape Amy. That was superb, you caught me off guard there, like a good writer should do. I'm so amazed at the way you make this story simple but elegant and intresting. You notice you don't go into unnersscary detail, you two just went straight into it. I think it's called "beating around the bush."
Even though there is no solid plot to your story (maybe the end), I enjoyed reading it. It most have taken months to finish it and you two surely put some hard work into you. Thank you both for the great story that I enjoy reading.
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is EASILY the best fic in this section. I didn't intend to read the whole thing, but I sat down and did it anyway. I think it's amazing that you managed to not only come up with a plot that long and intricate, but actually carried through and maintained it to the end. The sex scenes were also amazing, since you managed to make it descriptive, but without being overly detailed and anatomical. Cool shit.
I'll be reading the sequel as well.
I'll be reading the sequel as well.
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmmmmmmm....
Firstly, happy fucking new year
I'm stull stunned, you took that dark chapter you left us in and made a big warm and fuzzy chappy to follow it. *If you discount all the negativity twoards Sonic anyway
Long story short...you guys...well, you know what your doing. I've said it before, and I'll say it again. This is the kind of thing that people are gonna remember.
I still want to know who the father is though... Even thought Shadow has a damn good idea (and reason to have it) there's still enough uncertainty here.
Respectfully yours,
AntwerpsRule
Firstly, happy fucking new year
I'm stull stunned, you took that dark chapter you left us in and made a big warm and fuzzy chappy to follow it. *If you discount all the negativity twoards Sonic anyway
Long story short...you guys...well, you know what your doing. I've said it before, and I'll say it again. This is the kind of thing that people are gonna remember.
I still want to know who the father is though... Even thought Shadow has a damn good idea (and reason to have it) there's still enough uncertainty here.
Respectfully yours,
AntwerpsRule
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!!!! THIS STORY ROCKS!!!!!!!
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey guys,
molly, anna, (i dont care), is here, and i just wanted to say good job o nthe compeltion of the story. it was very good, and yeah. the whole rouge and sonci thing, unexpected, btu then again im anna im clueless and i have no feeligns. well now i dont. i ve gone goth. yes my hair is purple, and i am wearing blakc. yes theres studs and i got my liped peirced. i feel ive learned nothign form this story, but isnt tthat the point, to mindlessly read, enjoy the the story, and learn nothing? i mean was there a moral??? any way email me when the sequal coems around
kbye
molly, anna, (i dont care), is here, and i just wanted to say good job o nthe compeltion of the story. it was very good, and yeah. the whole rouge and sonci thing, unexpected, btu then again im anna im clueless and i have no feeligns. well now i dont. i ve gone goth. yes my hair is purple, and i am wearing blakc. yes theres studs and i got my liped peirced. i feel ive learned nothign form this story, but isnt tthat the point, to mindlessly read, enjoy the the story, and learn nothing? i mean was there a moral??? any way email me when the sequal coems around
kbye
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Thank you for updating. Don't worry as long as they come up i will be happy. I'm not gonna push you any harder
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, a sequel, interesting. Anyways, great work on the last 2 chapters.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, chapter 15 really finished off the story quite well. The last three chapters were brilliant, much better than the otherShadamy fics where it ends in sex. Although I think Knuckles might have understood Sonic a bit better, this chapter was amazing.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeaaaaaaah! He's alive, alive, Great Chapter. Its about time the f@#$ up mood lightens up.