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for A Rose And A Thorn

by Breech_Loader

person Silverpelt
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read the entire thing from beginning to end, and I can say that it had me in tears frequently. I loved it so much, and I'm glad that there is a sequel! You are a very good author! Don't stop writing because your fans will track you down and beat you!

Sincerely, Silverpelt
person Maverick 1812
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(Just finished reading the entire story) Oh... my... God. IT'S BRILLIANT! You two are, without a doubt, the greatest Shadamy writers in the history of the world! I worship only you oh great ones! Tell me who to smite and they shall be smoten! I can honestly say that I could read one thousand other Shadamy fics and not one of them would be as good as this! I am so happy that there are sequals! Woot! I would comment on each and every awesome detail individually, but it would take way too long. Suffice to say everything in the fic is perfect. Right down to the sex scenes! Speaking of which I believe we were promised another hot Shadamy sex scene.

Amy: I'll get the whips!

Shadow: Oh, but I don't like the whips. And I thought we were out of that Shadamy Parody fic.

Amy: Nope. Now come on. (Dragging Shadow behind her)

Shadow: (Shrugs) Well whatever makes her happy.

(Uber pimp music) Oh baby. Though I do have one problem. I guess it's that I can't imagine Sonic being so dark and evil. So in order to train my mind, I'm going to hit Sonic with this rolled up newspaper until any and all respect I have for the blue guy is dead. (Starts hitting Sonic with newspaper)

Sonic: Oh, hey! What the hell! Get off me you damn wierdo! Hedgehog brutality!

While I'm doing that, I might as well mention that I have never understood Rougic before this fic. Now I am more or less in support of it. Also, lets hope Sonic cleans up his act, otherwise he's getting more newspaper in the face!

Sonic: Have mercy!

NEVER!

Knuckles: I thought you guys said I shouldn't beat him up.

Shadow: We did, Maverick's just gone insane... again. (Whip noise) Ow! Safety word! Safety word!

Amy: Sorry.

(PS: Despite what this review may portray, I am a much bigger fan of Shadamy fluff than I am of Sonic Bashing. I reserve my bashings for only extremely necessary occassions. Like that damn kid from Sonic X. Ruin the greatest moment of canonical Shadamyness will he!?)
person magebear7
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the magebear doesnt understand why affnet isnt letting it log in, but oh well. exceptionally written story. the magebear doesnt really have any favorite sonic pairings, but this story has made it look at the characters in a new light. anyway, as for your beef with ffnet, the magebear realizes that there is a lot of crap on the site. even by the reviews it gets sometimes, it can tell the reviewer should not be allowed within fifty feet of anything that may be used to write. however, can the same thing not be said of affnet fics? are not practically half the fics written by horny, hormone driven lonely people looking to get off? the magebear thinks that before one can criticize another site, one must first fix ones own site. or the site one is working from. either way. also, if you would like to see the magebears work, its account is magebear7 everywhere. it only has a challenge on affnet, but it has a few fics on ffnet, so you can check those.
person Delta Boomer
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"A large, plump Doe who would have been quite attractive fewer ten years and thirty pounds..."


Hey, what's that supposed to mean? I happen to find large women far more attractive than those of 'ideal' weight. (Not to say that slim women aren't attractive as well) Not only that, but large women, because they believe thay are not sexy, tend to have much better personalities. So there. :P
person SonicTailsKnuckles
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fanfic, like I said before.
person Emperor Jaden
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Abosuletly Great Story! Love it...Amy and Shadow are personally my favourite pairing. I've read this story so many times I've lost count actually, I like it that much. I have not had the chance to read ARAAT2 or ARAAT3 yet. As my computer has been kinda funky. No the less though, Great Story!
person Mlz23
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know this story is finished, but I am currently reading it and I just want to say that it's awesome! This chapter made me love Shadow even more than I used to! It was great how you made the scene(in ch.10) work out, it was perfect! I also loved how Shadow comforted Cream after what happened =] Keep writing more awesome fanfics!
person The Penis
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic.
person Shadow Fan
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
They had the baby!!! I'm so happy for Shadow and Amy. Yay. I wonder what Sonic is going to do know? I can see Shadow and Amy being together. I can see them walking in the park and the baby with them. It is a cute thought. Just wanted to tell you that I might start on a story one day. Its just that I'm not good at writing stories with Drama or Romance or Mistery. I just need to get some tips from you. Your stories are my favorite and I decided that you might give me some ideas. Like I said I MIGHT make a story if I'm good at making them.
I love A Rose and A Thorn its kicks ass
person Kuroko
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you've done an excellent job all around. Now personally, I've enjoyed your Rouge/Sonic scenes more, although I'm not what you'd call a Rougic shipper, in the least bit. I'll only suggest that you explore more of what exactaly Sonic is feeling as apposed to the confusion it causes him. You've certainly created an interesting parallel between what's going on with both couples, but they haven't seemed to realize it. My only dissappointment has to be that I feel like the Amy/Shadow romance is being shoved down my throat. Maybe it's because I'm not really actively for or against any pairings, but it's getting a bit tiresome to see Sonic continually made out to be the bad guy who's crashing down on Shadow and Amy's relationship. You've done a really great job and I'm not trying to bash you at all, but just as a bit of constructive critisism, I think you should lighten up on how much you portray Amy and Shadow to be the victims, because you don't want it to take a nasty turn to being a sob story of their beingunaccepted. Thanks for reading, and keep up your good work.