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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good! More!! And yeah, I agree with you about Sonic's personality.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful update! Sonic just doesn't seem to get the picture that Amy is head over heels in love with Shadow now...I don't think anyone seems to get the picture actually...Sorry about my reviews beings so short...Don't have much to say or on my mind to type (lol). But anywho I definitely recommend that you both keep up the good work! Because this is one of the best Shad/Amy stories I read...I wonder what Rouge and Sonic are going to be to doing...? (lol)
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Considering I don't go to adult oriented sites, I don't know how I got here, but I'm glad I did. This story has been wonderful! And, I'm afraid to say it, but you've made me a Shadow/Amy fan, which I was most certainly NOT before reading this.
And I totally agree with you about Sonic, he's so cocky and arrogant it annoys me, I've always liked Knuckles and Shadow way better.
I love the plot line going on here, I'm actually in suspense waiting for the next chapter!
About the sex seance . . . considering I don't like reading them, I can still appreciate for what yours are. Unlike many which are mindless f******, these are very romantic, sweet and loving.
I simply love this fic and you better update soon or eles! *puls out ninja sword*
And I totally agree with you about Sonic, he's so cocky and arrogant it annoys me, I've always liked Knuckles and Shadow way better.
I love the plot line going on here, I'm actually in suspense waiting for the next chapter!
About the sex seance . . . considering I don't like reading them, I can still appreciate for what yours are. Unlike many which are mindless f******, these are very romantic, sweet and loving.
I simply love this fic and you better update soon or eles! *puls out ninja sword*
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....I just keep reading and reading, dang harlvey, i cant get enough of your fics x.x. So, whats next, a sonige? lol
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Taht was a great chapter, and im very sorry, i forgot to review last chapter *Molly punches herself in the head* it was also very errrrr ummmmmm ......... sorry i have thign with lemons btu it was still great!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NYYYYYAAAAAAAAHHHHH *molly falls backwards the satnds up* IM OK! great chappie, soem fluffiness! awwwww how sweet!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OI I love usher, sorry im listening and reading at the same time . gosh sonic is sooooooooooo clueless. WHAT A DUMBASS!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A) all those jack asses otu there who write shit liek the sonci realy loving amy shit, they have not read into this liek you guys did! what bulshit it is, i mean he has alway and will always not liek amy in that way and just idgnore this part but b) FUK OF ROUGE< KNUCKLES MINE < sorry............. errrrrrrrr i have an obsession!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ERRRRRRRRRR
UMMMMMM
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LOL Knuckles feels special today!! Jesus, i wish that was rouge walking in, me i nbed with knuckles.................... I didn't jsu tsay that, IM NOT INSANE!
I swear it's not that serious of an obssession! I'v seen the phychiatrist, wait dam now you really do think I am insane!
AK GTG WAKE ME UP WHEN SEPTEMBER ENDS IS ON!!!!!
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LOL Knuckles feels special today!! Jesus, i wish that was rouge walking in, me i nbed with knuckles.................... I didn't jsu tsay that, IM NOT INSANE!
I swear it's not that serious of an obssession! I'v seen the phychiatrist, wait dam now you really do think I am insane!
AK GTG WAKE ME UP WHEN SEPTEMBER ENDS IS ON!!!!!
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Impressive! Extremely and outstandingly impressive! Now, allow me to elaborate on my opinions...
The first thing I'd like to mention is that Shadow and Amy as a couple have much potential, potential that the two of you (and note that I said two XD) have blossomed upon greatly... The feeling you both engraved in your descriptions that made us believe that they honest to God truelly do have a connection was stupendous! And they work very well, the two of you did a phenominal job, you honestly did. This is the up-side, now, I have a single complaint as well...
I know it's gonna sound dubiously and pathetically ignorant at first, but please, read me out. I'm half and half on this topic. I agree totally, that Sonic never treated Amy the way he should have, and that he's broken her heart many, many times... But, I've honestly never seen Sonic as a 'bad guy' because of it. I never thought he did it on purpose, in complete aim of just leading her on and breaking her heart. In other words, Sonic has his flaws, yes, and he's not exactly Romeo... But you're seriously lacking the concept of him being a hero at heart... If Sonic didn't have a beautiful heart, he wouldn't be the character that he is today, and it was just really hard for me to see him as such a... well, a jerk. This is just my opinion, however, and I mean to offend the two of you or your well-typed letters in any way. I'd just like it if the audience was reminded that Sonic is, inside, a very good person, and that in terms of being a hero, it'd be very hard to match him...
Sonic's a good person inside. He's egotistical, he's blunt, he's hard-headed, thick, immature, and insensitive, and these are all qualities that can very easily make him a bad guy, but in truth, they're the same ones that make him such an icon, a superhero... Because they make him free. Because of these traits, he can make other people's problems, fears and cares just... go away... and that's a beautiful thing. I hope you guys can at least see my point. I don't expect you to change you fanfic or its plans in any way, just... I personally found it hard to accept Sonic being such a jerk. And a jealous one, at that. He obviously forgave Shadow for blowing up half the moon, I'm sure he can handle Amy being in love with someone else... Then again, this is your fanfic. And I applaud how well it's written.
Hope you understand! And keep up the good work!
SonicFrank: Long live the Blue Hedgehog
The first thing I'd like to mention is that Shadow and Amy as a couple have much potential, potential that the two of you (and note that I said two XD) have blossomed upon greatly... The feeling you both engraved in your descriptions that made us believe that they honest to God truelly do have a connection was stupendous! And they work very well, the two of you did a phenominal job, you honestly did. This is the up-side, now, I have a single complaint as well...
I know it's gonna sound dubiously and pathetically ignorant at first, but please, read me out. I'm half and half on this topic. I agree totally, that Sonic never treated Amy the way he should have, and that he's broken her heart many, many times... But, I've honestly never seen Sonic as a 'bad guy' because of it. I never thought he did it on purpose, in complete aim of just leading her on and breaking her heart. In other words, Sonic has his flaws, yes, and he's not exactly Romeo... But you're seriously lacking the concept of him being a hero at heart... If Sonic didn't have a beautiful heart, he wouldn't be the character that he is today, and it was just really hard for me to see him as such a... well, a jerk. This is just my opinion, however, and I mean to offend the two of you or your well-typed letters in any way. I'd just like it if the audience was reminded that Sonic is, inside, a very good person, and that in terms of being a hero, it'd be very hard to match him...
Sonic's a good person inside. He's egotistical, he's blunt, he's hard-headed, thick, immature, and insensitive, and these are all qualities that can very easily make him a bad guy, but in truth, they're the same ones that make him such an icon, a superhero... Because they make him free. Because of these traits, he can make other people's problems, fears and cares just... go away... and that's a beautiful thing. I hope you guys can at least see my point. I don't expect you to change you fanfic or its plans in any way, just... I personally found it hard to accept Sonic being such a jerk. And a jealous one, at that. He obviously forgave Shadow for blowing up half the moon, I'm sure he can handle Amy being in love with someone else... Then again, this is your fanfic. And I applaud how well it's written.
Hope you understand! And keep up the good work!
SonicFrank: Long live the Blue Hedgehog