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Hmm...well I have to say that as far as hardcore sex goes that was really good. So far Rouge has spent the whole story playing mind tricks on other people and Sonic has spent the whole time playing mind tricks on himself, but for a moment they were both honest. It brings to mind the saying that people are only truly honest when they're fighting or having sex. It would be interesting to see them become a couple later on in this story, with more than just physical chemistry (although that's nice too).

Also I read your other work recently, the one about Shadow (or his evil twin :D) raping Rouge, and it occurs to me that Knuckles spends alot of time busting down other peoples door's. Perhaps he has some kind of door-busting fetish? ;)

oh man that was classic knuckles look as i see is complete shock this is hilarious, dramatic and totaly sonic both of you keep it up!

what i will say is that Rogic was excellent! i highly enjoyed that, i highly enjoy this fic, and i do hope you update soon! futhermore, i was wondering whether there would be more pairings in this fic, and rather this is based on the comic, tv series, or video game?

Hmmm. An arrogant dick and a manipulative slut. Heh, they were made for eachother. Update soon.

It's almost scary. every time you update i fail to be dissapointed in almost any way. Thats actully why i reveiw on these stories. anyway down to the nitty-gritty stuff as some would say. I am genuinly suprised on the last chapter about sonic and rouge. no not becuase they had sex, but because when you actuly started describing their thoughts and such you actully hit what sonic is. in most fics about amy moveing onto omeone else hes just well.. a total jerk. and in fics that are about him usually portray him as some kind of romaticist.. isnt that what they said about eggman in the manuals for the games?
nice job and what not and the clich'ed 'keep it up' phrase for you two.

I have to say. Thus far this is a very well-written story with superb characterization for this type of story. That fact we actually see good glimpses at the characters' inner thoughts is an awesome touch. And, of course, Sonic might be well on his way to being over Amy by now, but I still get the hunch that he's still going to be after Shadow majorly because the lies Rouge fed him and he was suckered by would have him thinking he was doing the heroic thing by doing so (i.e. both avenging a wrong and trying to save an innocent from another [at least that would probably be his mindset, even if he is majorly misled]), which, though it would definitely be a huge mistake on Sonic's part, would still at least make for excellent drama as he gets handed a serious humility lesson (to put it mildly). In closing, please continue as soon as possible.

Well f$%#ing done ladies. Your descriptions were almost like a movie. But then again, I don't have much in a way of imagination, so that might be why. Anywho, great story, great update, make another one soon.

I really loved the chapter. And indeed, they deserve each other in a way, but in being just as 'evil' in this story, they also make the perfect couple. The seduction of Sonic with the real first 'fucking' of him. The physical part was just her getting a second dose of sex it seems.

SEE what i mean, i had to skip at least 3/4 of that chapter, couldnt you make it half half?

Greatest wisdom comes from common sense, which is extremly uncommon. Common sense would denote, that Rouge is a bitch, in this particular situation. Common sense will also denote that when Sonic goes barging in, much like Knuckles, he will get his arms ripped off and beatten with them. My common sense tells me that this whole situation is severly f@$&ed up. Now Sonic getting his ass kicked for being an a>#hole is perfectly fine, but Sonic getting beaten up under false pretenses is somewhat wrong. Common sense also tells me that this story is excelent, you should update, great job, both of you.