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for A Rose And A Thorn

by Breech_Loader

person Naomi
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this story is sooooooooooo funy I love it and in case you havent notice You made it so funny
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested to know how Rouge will handle this new turn of events. Please continue.
person Shadow fan
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry with the story!! This is getting so FUCKING cool!!!! Man I'm punching in the keys so hard that I put a crack in the bord!!! Hurry with the story befor I break my Key Bord!!!!!
person RAW19
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
shadow is so cool, and if sonic were any stupider it'd be illegal! Finally, a fic where shadow's the good guy for once, but i've yet to find a good fic involving chaos emeralds, transformations, eggman plots, or robots. any plans to do that here?
person Random Person
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY love this fic. I never really thought about the whole Amy/Shadow pairing but than as soon as I read this.....now I'm a huge fan. The fic itself is awesome because you were able to keep the characters real to themselves so Shadow doesn't put on a dress and do the chicken dance. I can't wait for the chapter please update soon!!!!
person Luminous Blane
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT! I have greatly enjoyed this fic and look forward to any future installments. one thing I don't get...why do they seem convinced that shadow has a mental instabillity? he's angsty, he's angry at the world, but he's not mentally unstable. I like how you put a line from the X-men movie in this. "If I had to say that, she wouldn't be my girl." anyway, when are the other heros of the sonicverse going to make another appearence? the last two chapters have been only amy, rouge, sonic, shadow, and a character who's purpose so far has been a plot point.
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was told to review this by the end of chapter one. so here I am. it's a VERY well done fic. but I don't think rouge would use shadow as a boy toy...then again, she probably wouldn't let him stay at her place if she wasn't getting anything out of it...ON TO CHAPTER TWO!
person Sword Dancer
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! I love how you’re showing that Shadow is changing by not attacking Sonic. Very realistic in my opinion.

What to say about Sonic and Rouge. It certainly seems that there . . . fling, was more then just a one night stand, even if Rouge isn’t ready to admit that. Personally I don’t see them as a good paring, but this new turn of events makes quite the interesting plot twist and story develop.

Oh . . . a rape . . . Umm, dose someone actually get raped or is it more of an attempt of rape?

Anyway (sorry for the side track there) I’m interested to see what will happen to Rouge, will she start to feel guilt for lying to Sonic . . . hmm, to early to tell I guess.

Also, well Eggman come into this story? Honestly I don’t see how he could possibly play a role in this tale.

Well, until next chapter, I salute you. (salutes with sword)

PS: Thank you for the ‘Most Intelligent Review’ award in chapter 8. That made me smile.
person 0ohk mj kffbggx
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person dragon85
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please!! By the way, I always liked Shaadow much better then Sonic. He's cool.