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Wow... Didn't see that one coming...

NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! OMG!!!! i feel bad for Kairi on how she had a baby and lost it!!! Poor Kairi! that part made me cry. And damn sephiroth! he's gonna rape Cloud!!! when is he gonna learn that Cloud said goodbye. i hope Leon saves Cloud! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!

Oh god Riku! No!
Make it better! Make it better now!
Oh my god, the dialogues are so realistic I can't believe it! How do you do it?!
UPDATE WOMAN!

Aw! Poor Sora! And, Stupid Riku.

Oh no! Oh no! Update! Quick! I'm begging you!
I love this story so much!

this was so great! please update soon!

Ok, I got two words for you: UPDATE FASTER
This is hella good, babygirl! I loved 'Welcome to the wonderful world of puberty', but damn, this is even better! You've definetely made me a RikuxSora fan... that is, when you're writing it!
I know that English isn't your first language, but you're still doing a pretty good job spelling and grammar wise, I'm impressed. As for the emotion and level of realism in both stories, you completely blew me away. You've taken Riku and Sora's relationship to a level where no one can even insinuate that they don't have feelings for each other (that is, next to friendship). I so love this, it's like watching a movie. An excellent one too.
I'll stop my worshipping now, before I can't stop myself.
Keep it up, you have no idea how many people like your writing.

It's gets better and better every time. I loved this chapter! Sora and Riku are delicious!

Huh? Wow that was fast! Great chappie, as usual! Hehe, loved how you ended it.
I'm really dying to know what Leon will do if he finds out about Seph and Cloud tho...
Keep up the excellence!

Great chapter! aww, sora and riku fluff... i loved it! Lol someone was watching them!
Update soon!