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for Not Enough

by Niffty24

person la femme de FSS
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interessant
person la femme de FSS
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...???
person Anima Sage Kurai
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yus! You updated! I'm sorry, but I cracked up so many times. I was like:
Run, bitch, run! A deranged red haired, pretty boy is chasing you! RUN!
I like this chapter, short or not, it doesn't matter! It's okay if you updated
late, that is so me right there.
I feel for Yuan hurting his hot lil' arm. *tear tear* And then Kratos got pwnd
by Zelos. Ha! Please update soon!
person Goki
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! >_> OR I'LL EAT YOU!!! ...please? =D
person Yuan\'s lover
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow (eyes grow large) Whatta nice chapter. that made me laugh alot. I feel so bad for poor Kratos. Yeah, right. Please update soon

Yuan/Kratos/Zelos what a hot couple.
person Katra
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY xD So good, I can't wait for the yuan/kratos-ness. Damn, update soon so I can be pleased^^ -day dreams0 5 outa 5 all da way
person Wonderful
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was really good. Wow, what a hot couple...::dies::
Update soon or I'll hurt you!
person SatanicMechanic
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“Well shit…as if this couldn’t get any worse…” Ooh Yuan, you tempt fate, or have you not realized yet that the last 1/3 of this little triangle is hiding in the closet? Oh yeah, I think it's going to get alot worse. (or alot smuttier, however you want to look it at ^_~)
person Anima Sage Kurai
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, that was *sniff* beautiful. I'm so glad you wrote my challange. *sniffs* I love you so dearly...*sniffs yet again*

And then. you make it worse on me and make me wait for another chapter!? Yes, now I have another story to look forward to after school. *sniffs*

I like your writing style, and Kratos talking to himself is quite funny. Yeah! Zelos was so upbeat, aw, how utterly cute.
I really hope you update soon!!

ASK (anima sage Kurai)

Oh, and Sebastion(sp?) Is his butlers name, but I hate the guy anyway.