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for The End is Nigh! A Gannon story.

by tergad

person Anon
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gosh, your grammar is horrible. take time when writing. a good writer shouldn't need to point out their own metaphors either, or for that matter, whose point of view the paragraph is being seen from.
person Anon
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol
person Anon
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More Gannon Gore
person AnnAnime
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it alot! I really liked the way you explained the timelines and such and it wasn't confusing at all to me. I don't really care if someone messes up on grammer, just as long as I get the point of what you're saying, After all it's not like it's getting graded or anything. over all I think you did an Excellent job!!!
person Tony Berg
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very Good! one Question: Is Link a kid (Young Link) or is he an adult? Please post answer.

Go ahead and write more. I was going to mention the grammar and spelling errors before I saw the end of the page.