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for Voyuer

by cheat

person Wright805
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a brilliant story. One of my favourites on the entire site. Especially this line;

"This wasn’t like the porn he’d watched as a teenager. As Hana kissed Rain, sliding her jacket off her shoulders slowly, he could see the love and tenderness shining through"

Nice work!