rate_review Reviews

wow a really good story, i always loved navi

pretty good keep it up

That's a good fic. Aside from some aspects of fanfics that I'm not used to (this is my first time reading an Adult fanfic *blush*), this was a very good fic. Your way of writing kept it interesting.

However, there is something I'm very confused on and I would like explained:
What's this about Navi having clothes? And what's there for Link to fit his penis inside? Navi's just a ball of blue light with wings. I'm so confused. T_T Can someone please explain what's going on? T_T

This story gives life to a much loved pairing in the fandom community. I rather liked the author's back story about faeries pairing with their masters or mistresses in some occassions. The actual text of the story could do without the blurbs and sudden inputs from the author throughout various parts of the text. For example, the story makes a comment about Link's good fortune that he hadn't lost his virginity by rape and then suddenly places a note explaining that s/he is not making a joke about rape. I believe this note is an exercise in futility, as history and my personal experience has shown that one of the unfortunate consequences of publishing any kind of work (online or otherwise) is that the author has very little say in how their work should or should not be interpretted. I feel that if the author wishes to make it clear that they do not find the concept of rape humourous then s/he should do so somehow in the context of the story instead of a note. These notes interrupt the flow of the story.

I give this story a 4/5 for creativity and an overall theme of true love.

nice story! really would like second chapter =)

...you read this story, and then all you can think of is the fact that she doesn't "fit" LOL
she was 1/4 of links size (it said so in the story) and if your dick is THAT big when you are 17, i guess i have to admit that mine is quite little O.o
well shrew all that!

GREAT STORY! I LOVE IT!!! i always thought that with all those girls who wants him, it would be ironic if someone else came in and took him, instead of asking first XD THANK YOU!

Ermmm...how does that work...? I mean...Navi's probably barely bigger than a 17 year old's dick...unless Link's really, really poorly endowed...I don't see how she could possibly get him inside herself.

His pinky might fit...

This was pretty good for a one-shot

That was great! I liked it!
But...Heheh...I always like fics that have...sex in them...*Blushes*
You should write another chapter, but please, if you choose to write another chapter,
then...PLEASE NO SADNESS OR DEATHS!
I HHHHHAAAAAATTTTTTEEEEEEEEE sad fics...
Hate them, hate them, hate them...I always start crying!
Well...Anyway: Great story! But you should have some more details in it.
Well, well...At least it was a good story and I liked it alot!

Nice story. Interesting theme.