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for Unknown Lives.

by Finality

person mina
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
totally rad!! you must make one with axel in it hes sooooooooo sexy!
WITH ANYONE! lmao!
I love zexy too but he had a small role in the game.
:(

Love ya,Mina
person Silver_Slumber
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kick ass story! I loved it! Bravo! I hope you write more stories, cause this was great! Keep up the great work.
person Something or another.
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. A COM exclusive fic. not something you see everyday. its a shame too, if there was more of these fics at nearly a fraction of your quality, it would still be great. as a major Zexion fan, this fic was great for me. it was interesting how you captured the violent tendancies of all the characters, especially the two main ones. your writing style is awe-inspiring. such advanced techniques are really, really fun to read.

I am certainly hoping for a continuation or another fic in the near future.
Thanks for a great read.
person Ayeshagirl
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
coz i read the whole story... heh... of course i did... i didn't just read the lemon.... which was very good by the way!
person KF
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally, someone to create a lemon scene using Larxene. I'll give you props just for making the first one I've ever seen, but the actual story itself makes it even better. I just think that the lemon could be maybe a little longer next time, but size doesn't really mean that much.

Great job.