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by ShadowAddi

person Iluvchurch/caboose
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting! I think is very intersting.....
person jojo
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how about a prophet comes to see him about ashley and then makes out with her?
person Milk
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was a really intresting story, i liked it alot
person zero
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome make another
person dark-shinobi420
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By the way people, sorry but i AM a very talented writer so yeah shove it
person Timmy
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad... I'd love to see more.
person Aislynn Andraste
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. This is a new kind of pairing for me. Just out of perverted curiosity, what does an elite's "member" look like? Perhaps you should try to describe it, because I just can't imagine that it would look like a human's, or be as small as a human's for that matter. I'm enjoying this, though, I'll check back in hopes that you've updated! Very nicely written.
person janomaru
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great fic you should contine
person janomaru
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dark_shinobi420 if i fucking see you in reality i will fucking slit your fucking throught
because you have no life and have to put other people down
so you better hope because ill be looking
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, don't beat yourself up about it. it was actually pretty good. i wouldn't mind seeing a few more chappies!