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for Divine Sins

by AoiNikko

person bloodycrisis
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, please continue the next chapter! =)
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
argh no! I thought there was another chapter, but I am so wrong D: Must read more! Oh my, 1 chapter and already 2 or 3 rapes? How...different. ;D Really, it's a great change from the norm, and I quite enjoy it so far. Thanks so much for writing this much. I can't believe you haven't updated in awhile! Please!
person Sam
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah this story is so good. It's very original, I've never seen anything like it. Where did you come up with all the ideas for it? It has soo many details that are all really unique. And the story in the prologue did you make that up? Anyway the story is really good and super original (yes I know I've already said that) and I really hope you update soon!
person Lacerta3
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM

This fic indeed promises to be very very interesting... Oh, I can't really wait to know what happens...
The concept is pretty original, and everything is very well written. Yuna is a nice addition, and if that strange man who warned Sora is Cloud, then things are going to get even better, because, wherever Cloud is, Sephiroth is lurking nearby... Hehehe, maybe he's the Saegin's Mahatma... But we will have to wait to find out, right?
Anyway, update whenever you can, the wait will be worth it.

:)

Lacerta
(lacerta3@hotmail.com)
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
person Rikka
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_____^!
Yay! One of the Favorite Authors is back! And such goodness....mmm...
I really want to see what comes next. Will Sora 'convert' Riku? Will they fall in love and create a swirly-marbled alliance of light and dark? Will the rest of the KH cast ever show up???? All this and more, on next wee--::smack::

Erm, yeah. Please write more!
person shawna
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! this story is awesome!!!!!! this sotry is really well written! i love it! is there more to the story or is this it? hopefully there is more, because i deffinately will be reading it! i'm makin all my friends read this! im adding you to my livejournal and hopefully you put something on there about this! or any other story that you have written, soon!!!!! this story is the coolest!!
person penny
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Exactly, why aren't you writing novels for a living? That was amazing. Now I'm off to read the rest of this chpater.
person penny
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just as great as the first part! I mean WOW. Hop eSora gets to kick some butt soon.
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Every story you write is so amazing! I'm definitely going to have to recommend this story too, along with Pisces. Your writing talent is amazing, you have a beautiful gift.