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can't wait for chapter for great so far!

Alright , for those who have been waiting so damn long on any new or updates: I am the former author of this fic , I typed it up mid-playthrough of the GBA game at the age of 14 lol Yes , it was my very first work & I agree that it is pretty bad for kid suddenly typed up on a whim , however . . . i'm now 21 & quite seasoned in the ways of many things. I promise you guys this thing will be re-written after I replay the game [on my PSP via emulation] so that I can regain all i've lost in story knowledge over the years.

Inaccurate, obviously, but still good. (You can't possibly have written a fanfiction before you finished the game...right?)

Okay, yeah, it gets pretty bad in the later chapters...but I can't in good conscience ONLY call out the author. I saw some of those reviews. Hikari the Pure, if you don't like het, don't read it. Same with Sara's comment about the Ped. Yeah, we know that this was an inaccuracy on the author's part anyway, Wil isn't that old and Rebecca isn't that young, but all of you should be ashamed. If I see a pairing that I don't approve of, I stop reading. You should try it some time.

what the hell Ive been waitin like to friggin years for one chap now i have to say that is a bnch of boloney

when are you going to update?!

I usually don't make a big deal of giving negative reviews to fics I hate, but this was awful. The spelling, the grammar, the formatting, the characterizations. the set-up...and chapter 3 gets an even lower score for the pedophilia.

I love the fic, its great, the pairings are funny, and I agree you really need to update faster, but like I say, art takes patience.

cant wait for the update this is very good anyone who thinks its crap has to be the stupidest mother @#$#*% you will ever meet

alright thats a really good fic right there...but theres a few things that need improving.

1.a 13 year old girl should know what a dick is, i know a 12 year old who knows as much as a person whos
been a prstitute for 30 years, i mean seriously
2. dont wail on canas hes my home dawg, besides...you should be complaining about the
bosses being unkillable except to paladins, and how the really stupid characters join near the end of the game, so threre
useless. haha i love that game....
3.keep adding those funny parts like "lyn gets wet watching us kik ass" those r funny as crap >=)
4.add reference to the inacuracy of throwing axes or lok piks or something
5. Update faster!!