rate_review Reviews

This has to be one of the greatest, if not the greatest, story i have ever read on this webiste. I congratulate you on your great story.

it rocked ass dude whens the next going to be done. i love wesker!!!

it was really good im giving you my highest regards

i loved it. i have never read a story that good about wesker. i think you could go pro and publish it.

yeah this is absolutely fantastic!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon! I can't wait to read more about Wes and Asherah's relationship! And who is this Alfred fellow? Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!

Who is this imposter that you say is Wesker? I wish I could rate this zero stars.

-A/R

Make Wesker meeaaaaan. Cause Wesker is an asshole. So make him super mean to people, even Asherah. So far he is super corny saying "her precious area" and "her special spot" Hahahahahaha, that cracked me up. Youre not a bad writer at all, you just gotta make him mean.

Line breaks would be nice and the lyrics are distracting. Plus, you really need to pick a narrative and stick with it. Blending script and story format just does not work. I also don't like the idea of Wesker being romantic, especially with so-called original characters because they are always Mary Sues. Besides that, his goal is somewhere along the line of having lots of power, not love.

There isn't much hope for this fic to be considered good, or even passable. But I doubt that'll stop you at all.