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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...You're a guy.... You're first fanfic... Smut... 4-some... hot.... sex... man.... yaoi.... you're male... I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *clings to* If you update this with a 5-some.. I will forever worship the ground you write upon!!!! .... Actually... *does so now* YOU'RE A GUY WHO WROTE A YAOI FAN-FIC!! AND A VERY GOOD ONE AT THAT!! THAT'S ALL I NEED!!!
~Kupo~
~Kupo~
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OoO*jaw on the ground drooling* holy! *wipeing away drool*damn that was hott! i love to see Sephy fuck Sora with Cloud*drools more*...i need a bucket e.e* gak! please continue! =^o^=!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa..This is your first Fanfiction you wrote? That's pretty hard to believe. They way you wrote youir smut was pretty...breath-taking. Lolz. I mean..a foursome? ON your first-shot? High Five girl! Haha my first fanfic was nothing compared to this. I gotta say..I'm pretty impressed! Good job on your smut. I think this is the first Fanfic I've read that had all Leon, Cloud, Sora, and Riku doing it together.
Also I couldn't help but think that after this incident that nothing was going to change? O.O haha lucky wishing. If this had a plot would they all be fighting over Sora? -_- Hope you make more stories. ^^
Also I couldn't help but think that after this incident that nothing was going to change? O.O haha lucky wishing. If this had a plot would they all be fighting over Sora? -_- Hope you make more stories. ^^
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O O.O like that wasega hooooot....but i wanna see Sephy get some....i'm he's gonna really leave poor Sora-chan sore,sore..LOL
Update please...*looks at Sora and Seph*
Update please...*looks at Sora and Seph*
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brillaint. I hope it isn't just a one shot.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was awsome, pure smut just the way we love it! *thumbs up*
But, now that Seph is there, you won't let us down, will you? I mean, there has to be a second part!
Don't leave him at the door, that would be cruel! XD
~Horizont
But, now that Seph is there, you won't let us down, will you? I mean, there has to be a second part!
Don't leave him at the door, that would be cruel! XD
~Horizont
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uhhhhhhhhhh
"cream my pants, I did."
Yup.
"cream my pants, I did."
Yup.
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*removes the tissue from her nose and fans self* that was absolutely delicious and this is your first fanfic here *claps hands* lovely writing. i could picture this situation perfectly and god, do i wish i coulda seen that in person. (or joined in) sora was such a hot uke (i nearly died when he asked that question) and now that sephiroth is in the mix.... :drool: please tell me that there is going to be more. this plot is just to good to leave it there. you should totally milk it for all that its worth. (bad pun, i know ^__^) looking foward to seeing more works from you in the future. so until next time, ja ne.