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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wanna see Sephy!!!!!!!!!!!
Gotta love gang-bangs ^-^
*glomps rilliant author*
Write more?
Pweaaaaaaaaaaaaase?
Gotta love gang-bangs ^-^
*glomps rilliant author*
Write more?
Pweaaaaaaaaaaaaase?
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...i think i creamed myself. u had better add in sephy. love your work here and can't wait to read more...with sephy hopefully. poor sora, lol.
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was awesome! Amazingly hot and entertaining all in one convenient package. ^_^ Wonderful writing. Please continue!
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really good! ooooooooooooo foursome! soo hot! although i dont like sephiroth.. but the whole leonxcloudxrikuxsora is great!
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woehoe! That was intense. Poor poor Sora lol ^_______^
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha. Thank you. But I'm afraid I must tell you I'm a guy.
Thank you all so far for the wonderful reviews. Keep them coming. Please?
Thank you all so far for the wonderful reviews. Keep them coming. Please?
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O YUM. Do another chapter? Please? Please please pleaaase? Sephiroth...
I drooled. a lot. You rocked my socks, and my jocks >D
I drooled. a lot. You rocked my socks, and my jocks >D
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There's gonna be a 5some yet?! OO *gets huge nosebleed* BRING IT ON! XD
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....for your first fiction, this contained.....a lot......*is still rather dumbfounded*
I saw your name and said "well, this seems like a good fiction to try, judging from the username..." but I never expected -all- of that! It was funny, shocking and fun, to say the least...good job!! To be able to come up with all that on your first story shows you have a very creative mind and I liked it how Sephiroth appeared in the end, very funny. ^__^ This was my first fiction with more than two people I'm pretty sure, so it seemed like an overflow (no pun intended) but great job!! Have a great day and thanks for your great writing!! :D!
I saw your name and said "well, this seems like a good fiction to try, judging from the username..." but I never expected -all- of that! It was funny, shocking and fun, to say the least...good job!! To be able to come up with all that on your first story shows you have a very creative mind and I liked it how Sephiroth appeared in the end, very funny. ^__^ This was my first fiction with more than two people I'm pretty sure, so it seemed like an overflow (no pun intended) but great job!! Have a great day and thanks for your great writing!! :D!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi again!! Sorry, I forgot to put some stuff in my last review, so I guess you can look at this as a continuation if you want...my last review was right after I finished your fiction, so I was still rather overwhelmed and hadn't yet sorted out my ideas into a more organized way, so here they are! ^_^
Very good job on your fiction, I must say again!! Four people on your first time around the fiction world?? I have to say that that is a truly amazing feat and you pulled it off very well! *gathers up people to clap for you* I'm still even a little too dazed to write a great review, but I won't leave a third, I promise! ^_^ But honestly, you did a really good job! I couldn't have pulled off more than two people even if I tried, ever, no matter how many times I might try and you do it just like that on your first fiction!! I have to say that you should put that on your list of talents... "1) Intelligent 2) Nice 3) Able to write great foursome fictions...."
Thanks again!! :D!!
Very good job on your fiction, I must say again!! Four people on your first time around the fiction world?? I have to say that that is a truly amazing feat and you pulled it off very well! *gathers up people to clap for you* I'm still even a little too dazed to write a great review, but I won't leave a third, I promise! ^_^ But honestly, you did a really good job! I couldn't have pulled off more than two people even if I tried, ever, no matter how many times I might try and you do it just like that on your first fiction!! I have to say that you should put that on your list of talents... "1) Intelligent 2) Nice 3) Able to write great foursome fictions...."
Thanks again!! :D!!