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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh! ^_^ looks again *faints* knees..... wobbly....
it was amazing!!
walks off in a daze
it was amazing!!
walks off in a daze
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
@_@ That was the best lemon I've ever read. You = GOD! I would forerer be in your debt if you made a prt two~! PLEASE! *begs*
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O
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~^____^~ GAH!! This is good! I LOVE IT!!! Please write another chapter or even better several more!!
Yay! Sephiroth is joining in! Could you give Cloud a bigger role? Maybe he and Sephiroth can have some fun together? ^^
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~^____^~ GAH!! This is good! I LOVE IT!!! Please write another chapter or even better several more!!
Yay! Sephiroth is joining in! Could you give Cloud a bigger role? Maybe he and Sephiroth can have some fun together? ^^
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL~ You had me laughing so much during this! xD Sora is so cute, so fuckable! <333 Great way to end the chapter, too! ^_^
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that...was - SO HOT!! I LOVE THIS STORY! OOOOOHHHHH!!!! PLZ make like a sequal to it or sumthin! With all 5 of them! that'd be H.O.T.!!!
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, more please. This fic is, like, my dream come true, and I REALLY want another chapter to see how Seph adds into the equation. You have one of the dirtiest minds I've ever seen and it rocks. It really does.
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really hot. It felt like a good porn video: nonexistent plot, lots of cum shots, and a circle-fuck thrown in for the heck of it.
In the physical side of it, do some research on the technical aspect of double anal, especially with a virgin ass. Vaginas are one thing - they're made to stretch - but an anus could be pretty badly damaged doing that. I'm glad you remembered a bit of lube, though sensible condoms might have spoiled the craziness.
This assumed, of course, that such things as "that's physically possibe" really matter. The sex was great, and that's the important part. You write well, girl. Keep it up!
In the physical side of it, do some research on the technical aspect of double anal, especially with a virgin ass. Vaginas are one thing - they're made to stretch - but an anus could be pretty badly damaged doing that. I'm glad you remembered a bit of lube, though sensible condoms might have spoiled the craziness.
This assumed, of course, that such things as "that's physically possibe" really matter. The sex was great, and that's the important part. You write well, girl. Keep it up!
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oops, you're a boy. That still doesn't change the "great writer" part. XD
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAYUM!You're telling me this is your first fanfiction? I mean, ever?! Dayum...
I loved it. It had the perfect amount of smut, kinkiness and hardcore a yaoi-fangirl like me needs on a daily basis. You definetly made my day.
I really liked your writing style, though I might suggest a little revision on the part when Sora and Leon go at it, because it was pretty confusing when Riku joined in: I couldn't picture out what exactly they were doing.
Do write a second chapter, I can't wait to see little sora in a kinky foursome...
Peace out,
-BDP
I loved it. It had the perfect amount of smut, kinkiness and hardcore a yaoi-fangirl like me needs on a daily basis. You definetly made my day.
I really liked your writing style, though I might suggest a little revision on the part when Sora and Leon go at it, because it was pretty confusing when Riku joined in: I couldn't picture out what exactly they were doing.
Do write a second chapter, I can't wait to see little sora in a kinky foursome...
Peace out,
-BDP
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG wow that was the best you have to do another one with Sephiroth. That was the best. PLEASE do one with sephiroth.l Awsome story