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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off, let me just say... YUMMY!
For a first fic, this is actually well written and the descriptions were very well put. I'd love to either see this story line expanded or even more stories from you. Well done. ^_~
For a first fic, this is actually well written and the descriptions were very well put. I'd love to either see this story line expanded or even more stories from you. Well done. ^_~
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoo hooooo! *high fives*
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOT! UPDATE PLEASE!
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Perfect mix of hot man smex and adorable naive Sora. Great work!
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! i luv'll's this story!! are you gonna make anymore?! please say yes!! cool-ness!!
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh my god.
Sooooo beautiful.
Loved it sooooooo much.
o.O Plus Seph? *heart heart heart*
Unbelievable ecstasy.
Sooooo beautiful.
Loved it sooooooo much.
o.O Plus Seph? *heart heart heart*
Unbelievable ecstasy.
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hoooooly /god/. That really was beautiful. So beautiful that I bookmarked it and am going to send it too my other rabid yaoi fangirl friends.
You must add Sephy!! >:) Then there could be a fivesome!! And if anyone could pull /that/ fivesome off, it would be you. At least, that's my impression after the mind-blowing (insert very bad pun here) foursome.
Anyway, in short, very smutty, wonderful story (because we've /all/ wanted to see Cloud/Leon/Riku/Sora). And you'd better add Sephy, 'cause that would just be...oh, bishi overload (insert another pun here).
Faithfully bookmarked,
Rena-chan
You must add Sephy!! >:) Then there could be a fivesome!! And if anyone could pull /that/ fivesome off, it would be you. At least, that's my impression after the mind-blowing (insert very bad pun here) foursome.
Anyway, in short, very smutty, wonderful story (because we've /all/ wanted to see Cloud/Leon/Riku/Sora). And you'd better add Sephy, 'cause that would just be...oh, bishi overload (insert another pun here).
Faithfully bookmarked,
Rena-chan
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was to lazy to log in, but that was amazing!!! I loved Seph showing up at the end too! That was just the smut fix I needed!
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, yeah, get seph into the action too! Great smut
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very well done!! You took all of the sexi people from the game and put them into one story! Can't wait for more.